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Published: 2001-11-12 20:29:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 122; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 22
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Description I sit by the lake
It receives my eyes and mesmerizes them

The water is timeless
It is forever changing

Its gentle lure writes these words
And my imperfections are revealed
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Comments: 5

higgs [2001-11-29 20:02:57 +0000 UTC]

nicely said

higgs.
fear what you dont understand.. >
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ammegand [2001-11-28 10:04:50 +0000 UTC]

right on.

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klf [2001-11-20 15:47:59 +0000 UTC]



this poem has very beautiful imagery and meaning.

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cooper [2001-11-19 07:26:43 +0000 UTC]

beautiful... reminds me of what I was trying to say in my poem called A Continuous Struggle... but not many understood it..... anyways nice poem

@coop@

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solstice [2001-11-13 08:35:57 +0000 UTC]

i have the same idea sometimes
that what i write isn't by me, i'm just the filter through which so many things flow onto paper
great poem in subtlety and humility

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