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.caught by flames
frightened
by infatuation
of burning
alive
a name
upon the flames
a tidal pull
of submission
.
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Comments: 3
keen [2002-01-20 21:51:05 +0000 UTC]
this is more in-line with a tight piece. nice work article.
slip into:
https://www.deviantart.com/deviation.php? id=96646
-flow-
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klf [2002-01-20 18:39:56 +0000 UTC]
you do so well with this style, always tells so much with so few words.
beautiful!
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orbital [2002-01-20 18:30:28 +0000 UTC]
very nice poem.
perhaps it's just my taste. it seems like it needs more...
maybe not.
-orb
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