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Published: 2002-01-01 21:13:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 201; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 50
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i miss something
its symbol unknown
space one

to hurdle in blue green
to be close enough
to feel the distance pain

eternal logic
daring to breathe
wrapped in a cacoon
on a myra eve


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keen [2002-01-09 01:03:25 +0000 UTC]

this is nice... don't have to fully understand it to feel some of the emotional slipstream...

step into the slipstream:
https://www.deviantart.com/deviation.php? id=96646
-flow-

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kieken [2002-01-01 21:48:00 +0000 UTC]

there's something odd about the last verse...don't know what it is, I like it though

read it a couple of times before I understood it half.

Happy New Year

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simplicity is the quietest thing that speaks the most

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klf [2002-01-01 21:42:44 +0000 UTC]

you weave words well, very nice feel to this.

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