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Published: 2013-04-04 14:07:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 21556; Favourites: 583; Downloads: 0
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Join Africa-comic group!Okay, this picture has been roaming the internetz for a while, I drew it a couple weeks ago (as you can see from my signature, still indicating March '13) and uploaded it on Facebook first, but I liked it and thought I'd upload it here, too
When I submitted the test page for Africa I received loads of useful pieces of advice, one in particular, which many of you suggested, was to make Africa and Chui more different, because they looked too much alike.
Well, I've been working on that ever since. Can you tell Africa and Chui apart in this picture?
Please be frank, I don't get offended if you say you don't! XD It's very important for me that readers manage to distinguish characters, especially if the two main characters are so similar.
I also added a like of rounded spots on Africa's pelt, since I received the suggestion to vary her spot pattern a bit. How do you like it? ^_^
Once again, thank you SO much for your constant support and critique! It helps me a lot
And once again... again XD
Africa and Chui are LEOPARDS. Not Cheetahs. Not Jaguars.
I know that cheetahs aren't this bulky. Because these two AREN'T cheetahs! XD
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How odd, about the leopard's eyes. But, you're welcome.
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Oh yes there are^^
Amber eyes leopard: [link]
Green eyes: [link]
Orange eyes: [link]
Also, I'm not sure this is photoshopped, but it doesn't look like it. Even greener eyes: [link]
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Nah, not photoshopped. Just lighting, I guess. There is another big cat beside this one, as well.
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Oh my, I hadn't noticed that before XD
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The characters are easily distinguishable just by the shape of their faces or tips of their tails. You did a great job. I can't wait to see what comes from this comic!
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Aww thank you a lot my dear! <3 I'm so happy you can tell them apart easily^^
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np <3 lurve you arvy
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FFF thanks a ton again! <3
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I'm still gonna revenge-ship them.
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I'm gonna draw a pic of their revenge shipping soon ^^
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Oh my, truly? 8D That'd be SO epic! <3
Thank you! <3
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ah, very nice job in making them completely unique in comparison to each other while still being the same species. I can't wait to see more of them!
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Aww Thank you so much! <3
You'll see more real soon! 8D
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WOW!
c´est très cool!
mais il y a quelque chose je voudrais critiquer... je pense le qeue est trop mince, le qeue du chui.
oh, n´es pas en colère à moi maintenant, je voudrais dessiner un image que "Eternal Rivals" trop mauvais xD
tu est une champion!
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Aww mais merci^^
Ah, et merci pour le conseil aussi! Je vais lui donner une queue lus grosse
XD Muhaha, c'est pas grave, tu peux bien le faire^^
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I can easily tell them apart
Looks great, too ^^
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Aww great! 8D thank you^^
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Cheetahs arent bulky. Yes. They also have a marking, that makes them look like they are 'crying' 
Anyone says they are missing that marking, or only say they are bulky for a cheetah? .u. Or at least did they say that the patterns are off for a cheetah?
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OH U <3
XD Incredibly, they say both things XD
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Okee .u.
-flails away on the sight of '<3 ' while screaming-
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It looks sooooo amazing *_________*
Even if they are rivals, I really like them as couple <333
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I could tell them apart on the sample page, but here the difference is even more prominent. I love how Chui looks sharper (I don't really know how to explain it), but Africa looks rounder and softer. I hope you can understand what I mean, but if not just know that it all mean good job!
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Aww thank you so much! I'm happy you can tell them apart easily
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I can't wait for the comic!
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Both are definitely different, but very awesome at the same time!
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Ohoho, Thank you so much! <3
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