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I pace the halls in my mind,The corridors of thought.
Passing rooms filled with dreams,
yet all remain locked.
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Comments: 38
Spinning-Jenny [2014-10-20 13:51:11 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous, gorgeous work you have here. Β
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AsherMane In reply to Spinning-Jenny [2014-10-20 13:51:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much
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EnchantmeCosplay [2014-10-19 21:20:00 +0000 UTC]
You should write a book! This is beautiful.
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AsherMane In reply to EnchantmeCosplay [2014-10-19 21:22:45 +0000 UTC]
Wow thank you maybe one day ill compile my works into a book.... maybe
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ohbeautifuldelilah [2014-10-19 17:18:38 +0000 UTC]
Lovely imagery Short but definitely striking.Β
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AsherMane In reply to ohbeautifuldelilah [2014-10-19 17:36:14 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much Β
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ohbeautifuldelilah In reply to AsherMane [2014-10-20 05:45:42 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
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Skye-42 [2014-10-18 00:34:12 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow, I need to watch you. I love your poetry.
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AsherMane In reply to Skye-42 [2014-10-18 00:35:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much please Β do
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comatose-comet [2014-10-15 12:51:20 +0000 UTC]
for something so short, you say so much wonderful work
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comatose-comet In reply to AsherMane [2014-10-15 12:56:32 +0000 UTC]
no problem - I love checking out other writers' work
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TehSweetheart [2014-10-15 01:51:58 +0000 UTC]
So simple and yet so well written. Just wonderful!
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TehSweetheart In reply to AsherMane [2014-10-15 01:56:58 +0000 UTC]
You are more than welcome! (:
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AskFallensky [2014-10-14 01:27:14 +0000 UTC]
That's amazing! You have wonderful ability. :3
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AskFallensky In reply to AsherMane [2014-10-14 01:31:14 +0000 UTC]
If I don't leave a comment on your other poems, it's because I don't know what to say. It's too amazing for words. :3
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AsherMane In reply to AskFallensky [2014-10-14 01:32:48 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh thank you that's the best comment you could leave right there!
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AskFallensky In reply to AsherMane [2014-10-14 01:40:00 +0000 UTC]
You're so welcome! I believe you've inspired me to write my own poems. You're magnificent (I used a different adjective thereΒ Β
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AsherMane In reply to AskFallensky [2014-10-14 01:40:57 +0000 UTC]
Thats so cool send me a watch and i'll do the same so I can see your upcoming poems!
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Eagles-Rise [2014-10-14 00:04:48 +0000 UTC]
I can clearly visualize this in my head, you've got such visualization and power packed into such a small, straight to the point piece. Amazing job, I'm sure many people can relate, I know I can.Β
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AsherMane In reply to Eagles-Rise [2014-10-14 00:08:26 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, several people have complimented my ability with imagery.
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Eagles-Rise In reply to AsherMane [2014-10-14 00:14:24 +0000 UTC]
As they should, you've got great skill with it.Β
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