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ashesanddisarray — autumn goes on without us
Published: 2008-09-14 00:48:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 157; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 8
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Description When I read the words
They’re always so much smaller
Each raindrop falling outside
Seems to get a little louder

So where are you when the sun goes down?
Sitting in your room
Hoping these feelings don’t make you drown
With her feet pressed up against the passenger seat
Listening for the silence to come around

Imagining her hair brush your arm
You realize it’s just a tailspin from here
Another soul taken in by the charm
Passing time with you in mind
All these thoughts never meant any harm

Our hearts spend a lot of time
Under the table and dreaming
I’m always waiting for a lovers rhyme
Holding your hope softly in my hands
There’s always another stair left to climb

I’ll keep you safe for a little while longer
Whispering sweet sounds into your ear
Anything to make you feel a tad bit stronger
I’ll always be able to hold you up
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Comments: 6

37minutestomonday [2008-09-14 15:41:10 +0000 UTC]

I think this is awesome and lovely. Just like you!

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ashesanddisarray In reply to 37minutestomonday [2008-09-14 16:42:00 +0000 UTC]

awwww thank u!

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b1gfan [2008-09-14 07:04:44 +0000 UTC]

very clear and vivid

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ashesanddisarray In reply to b1gfan [2008-09-14 16:42:16 +0000 UTC]

thank u!

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JeremiahFrost [2008-09-14 00:58:32 +0000 UTC]

This is very good! Some clever word choices, and imagry
Great work Ashes!
A very heart warming love poem

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ashesanddisarray In reply to JeremiahFrost [2008-09-14 01:26:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you! Glad you like it. I'm in the process of trying to rhyme more, and love is such a good subject to try it with.

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