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20091202: ScrappedFor the *Megaman-Legends-Club contest: "Bonne Family Business"
The Bonne Cleaning Service prides itself in cleaning (out) clients' property like never before!
I know the balance is off, I'm not too sure what to do about it right now though. Enjoy!
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**Giggles!**
I know the feeling.
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this is probably my favourite thing that you've done. I love that you left the line art like so.
however it would look cooler if she was actually dusting a servbot or something. I would basically just put something there so it doesn't look derpy like "why are you dusting air"
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Thanks! It was your suggestion to leave it that I listened to ^_^
I finally remembered what I wanted to add as the item wot needs with the dusting: a safe
I'll add it when I'm less groggy!
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Maybe the right foot could come to (her) right and forward a bit, which would have the nice side effect of making her butt stick out a bit more too.
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You may have something there, but I'm looking at the overall structure of the picture, I know why it's off balance (negative space to the right) but I don't know how to solve it just yet
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Oh sweet you colored it. Nice!
Hmm...off balance? Well I had hoped you would include what she was dusting. Maybe that's why its off. Maybe take that lil guy, with the tear and have her dust him. And then the other lil guy and the bag put a little further in the background to the left side. And maybe increase the background a smig so it doesn't look like its touching her lil maid hat.
(Course this is coming from someone who doesn't know the megaman plot so...there's probably a good reason why you put the two robots in the back together, but I wouldn't know. You may now proceed to beating my ignorance. 
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I guess why it looks lopsided to me is I originally wanted to have Tron in the middle surrounded by servbots but I was running out of time so I got cheap and just drew a few. I dunno, maybe I'll just say this is unfinished for now until I can think of a better way to put things together (maybe with furniture).
I admit I have no idea how to do layouts.
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CHEAPSAKE!!!!!! 
I've got a book that talks roughly about layouts. When I get home later I'll scan the pages and email em to ya if you want?
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Sure! I have a book on it and a few web links too (though I'll take any help heh)
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