HOME | DD

atsy — Fake
Published: 2011-08-08 04:21:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 183; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
Redirect to original
Description Promises whispered in my ears
Your plastic lips to mine
Chocolate covered words
Your bittersweet lies
I should have known,
I was told
You're just the icing
On the fake
Related content

[ TEXT ]


atsy - Drowning

atsy - I want to take away your pain
Comments: 8

Daroga1 [2011-08-08 04:36:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh. This is..Deep

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

atsy In reply to Daroga1 [2011-08-08 04:50:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

lunanspirit [2011-08-08 04:24:17 +0000 UTC]

I know how it feels hun.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

atsy In reply to lunanspirit [2011-08-08 04:27:01 +0000 UTC]

Actually, this isn't about me, it's part of a 300 poem challenge I am doing, I combined a bunch of challenges and this was a prompt. I wrote about how I imagined it would feel like...

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

lunanspirit In reply to atsy [2011-08-08 04:29:05 +0000 UTC]

Well, you nailed it.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

atsy In reply to lunanspirit [2011-08-08 04:51:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Literarysubstance [2011-08-08 04:23:55 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

atsy In reply to Literarysubstance [2011-08-08 04:27:09 +0000 UTC]

thank you

👍: 0 ⏩: 0