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Published: 2011-08-13 23:57:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 220; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description There's a smile on my face
And sorrow in my heart,
My melancholy soul.
I can taste my salty tears,
Feel the weight of the darkness
That circles my eyes,
The heavy lids I dare not close,
Harboring movie screens behind them,
Endlessly replaying the same sad scenes
I breathe a little easier knowing
I am spoken, not alone
But there is an emptiness, an abyss
Waiting to be filled.
I am needy, small and weak,
Coming to you for the love I never felt.
My voice rings out, loud and clear;
I stand, head raised,
A smile on my face.
It is but an illusion.
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Comments: 9

WilloftheWarrior [2011-08-16 23:13:19 +0000 UTC]

oh sweetheart. -hugs you tight- its beautiful but so sad. I wish I could give you my strength.

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atsy In reply to WilloftheWarrior [2011-08-16 23:16:35 +0000 UTC]

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WilloftheWarrior In reply to atsy [2011-08-16 23:21:58 +0000 UTC]

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DanaMulderDrago [2011-08-16 02:22:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh, dear, you wrote about me without even knowing it!
You portrayed the right feelings prerfectly.

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atsy In reply to DanaMulderDrago [2011-08-16 02:24:39 +0000 UTC]

Haha thanks. Glad you could relate to me... thanks for the too!

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DanaMulderDrago In reply to atsy [2011-08-16 02:25:50 +0000 UTC]

You deserve it!

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finishyourtea [2011-08-14 18:27:40 +0000 UTC]

This piece, I feel, refers to myself (haha, I sound selfish, but it's true). I really enjoyed it. Good job.

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atsy In reply to finishyourtea [2011-08-14 18:37:12 +0000 UTC]

Glad you could relate to it, and you're welcome for the fav

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finishyourtea In reply to atsy [2011-08-14 18:42:39 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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