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Published: 2011-07-31 03:29:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 99; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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It's All in GreyYour words won't change my mind
I've already decided
Don't bother with a phony smile
Flashed my way
But it's all in grey
No way no how
Nothing matters
It's all in grey now
It's far too late now
Fight against the words that break you
I will never let them take you
Fight against the tears that shake you
I would want to make you
Cry
So tonight
Your face,
Engraved
In my mind
Just a matter of time
Before I fall for you again
I have to get out while I still can
There's nothing left to be broken
Your words won't change my mind
(No way no how)
I've already decided
(Nothing matters)
Don't bother with a phony smile
(It's all in grey now)
Flashed my way
(It's far too late now)
It's all in grey
Comments: 6
0-SEBASTIAN [2011-08-03 21:38:51 +0000 UTC]
I like the title of the poem, very well chosen, and it does indeed have a nice flow to it, the whole poem.
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Church38 [2011-07-31 03:51:25 +0000 UTC]
I like this a lot, sounds like it would be great song material. Great job regardless, I like the word choice and how easy it all flows
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atsy In reply to Church38 [2011-07-31 03:58:52 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much. I thought it could be a song, but I think it would need a little bit to it first, an idea of how the music would be but I have no talent whatsoever with that aspect of art.
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Church38 In reply to atsy [2011-07-31 04:01:44 +0000 UTC]
Haha neither do I, but I still write "songs"
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