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atsy — My Choice [NSFW]
Published: 2011-08-12 02:09:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 93; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description I don't want to
But I want him to keep being nice to me
I don't want to
I'm afraid
I don't want to
But I want, need, a friend
I don't want to
This feels wrong
I don't want to
But he said he'll tell
I don't want to
I'm so scared of him, of everyone
I don't want to
Why is he doing this to me?
I don't want to
Why do I feel so dirty?

"I didn't want to."
Will they understand?


I didn't want to…
Why didn't they hear me?


                              I cried,
                            Spoke out,
                      Screamed the truth
                 They didn't want to listen
                      But now they had to
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Comments: 10

WilloftheWarrior [2011-08-13 03:16:40 +0000 UTC]

intense and well worded. I like the back and forth between yourself and your personification.
I have a feeling that this work has a lot more meaning then most would care to think. am I right?

I think it is a great piece

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atsy In reply to WilloftheWarrior [2011-08-13 22:10:55 +0000 UTC]

You are correct.
And thank you so much for the compliment, it meant a lot to me...

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WilloftheWarrior In reply to atsy [2011-08-13 22:34:15 +0000 UTC]

you are very welcome. I feel like maybe you need someone to talk to. you more then likely have friends but if you want another one. Hi

anytime you want me to view your work or look at something let me know

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atsy In reply to WilloftheWarrior [2011-08-13 22:38:05 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! Thank you so much! And if you ever need someone to talk to or want someone to check out your works, just let me know...

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WilloftheWarrior In reply to atsy [2011-08-13 22:41:25 +0000 UTC]

well I added you to my friends list and im watching you.

honestly I wish DA would change that...its sounds soooooo wrong

but yeah I will

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HamsterRawr [2011-08-12 17:47:56 +0000 UTC]

Very powerfull and moving poem. Greatly enjoyed it ^-^

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atsy In reply to HamsterRawr [2011-08-12 19:40:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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HamsterRawr In reply to atsy [2011-08-13 07:18:21 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome

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Aibfinnia [2011-08-12 03:25:45 +0000 UTC]

Great intensity!! i really like this. i got chills

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atsy In reply to Aibfinnia [2011-08-12 03:28:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, and thanks for the fave

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