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Published: 2011-08-05 07:22:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 103; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description If time were a river,
I'd build a dam
And let the current
Take me in
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Comments: 8

0-SEBASTIAN [2011-08-07 02:21:45 +0000 UTC]

Leave it, it's perfect. A nice poetic take on "go with the flow."

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atsy In reply to 0-SEBASTIAN [2011-08-07 03:03:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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NyraStarray [2011-08-06 06:09:28 +0000 UTC]

I love this too!!! are you guna write more to it??? or just leave it like it is?

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atsy In reply to NyraStarray [2011-08-06 07:18:56 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure... i kept trying to, but it didn't turn out... maybe later I will get the inspiration to make it a bit longer

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NyraStarray In reply to atsy [2011-08-06 07:36:46 +0000 UTC]

ahhh i know what you mean, i have two of my works up that are incomplete but i wanted to get them out there before i forgot

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atsy In reply to NyraStarray [2011-08-06 07:47:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, and I thought also maybe people would give me suggestions of where to take it

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MonsterSalsa [2011-08-06 02:34:46 +0000 UTC]

Eeek! I love this! It is so simple but so good <3

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atsy In reply to MonsterSalsa [2011-08-06 07:19:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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