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Published: 2016-04-08 14:04:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 2816; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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1. InsomniaMy emotions packed
Into bags beneath my gaze;
Can I shoot the sheep?
2. Torn Photograph
Faded laughter of
Once strong friendship; I repress
Their sweet memory.
3. Doubt
All movement cut off;
The boat sinks, no breathing air.
Pure darkness awaits.
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All of them are really beautifully worded. You have done such a fantastic job! ^^
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These are really good, but the first one is probably my favourite ^w^
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you're welcome! :3
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