Kaizoku-hime [2015-04-07 15:58:48 +0000 UTC]

I have said this before to others that shared their lovely poetry, I am not really in a position to say anything about it as I have little to no knowledge in poetry:3 
To go ahead and say something I can actually say something about is ofc what it makes me feel so here goes I really enjoyed the straight-forwardness in this Haiku. To me, it feels very matter of fact. and I really like that about it it has a very prominent narrative (well that is logically starting with the "I've" x]) and it feels as if the narrator is meant to come across as a wise person, or at least someone who likes to think long and deep about things then come to a certain conclusion. well but that's my little blabla about a poem as I don't really know anything about it like I said. I thought it was pretty either way=] 

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Leopard-Enya [2015-03-29 16:53:47 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's a great Haiku!

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raymix1000 [2015-03-18 00:01:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow. just bravo.

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Indigo-Demon [2015-02-27 23:22:56 +0000 UTC]

THIS. IS. PERFECT.           

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