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AnotherxSide [2009-06-11 03:10:35 +0000 UTC]

This is so perfect =O

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Xeyth [2009-05-06 02:58:04 +0000 UTC]

Hi there! =] I'm part of the team, and you submitted this for critique so I'll give it my best shot. ^^

The first thing that struck me about this picture is that it has a rather nice composition, and I love the texture of the watercolor work. The chaotic specks of watercolor really give an edge to the character and overall image.

Anatomy wise, everything looks pretty simple and tidily done and I can see you are working with a particular style in mind here, however there are a few small errors which you could pay attention to in the future. One example would be the area inside of her ear, and I also noticed the line of the neck sort of connects to the chin in an awkward manner. Her shoulder also seemed to slump a little to the right making it look a bit square ish. These things are sort of minor and not exactly too noticable to the overall image mind you.

It's clear you have put a lot of time and effort into the details of the hair in this picture, however this could look even prettier if you focused on making the strands a little more aesthetically pleasing; varied yet flowing in a natural manner. An easy way to work on this is to just observe how real hair looks, and simplifying that down. You still did a pretty good job though, particularly on the curls. =]

Visually this image might benefit if you attempted to digitally erase some of the visual noise around the edge of your drawing, such as the scanner picking up subtle creases in the paper. Little things like this distract from the image, unless it's clearly intentional. =] I also think that if you wanted her skin to seem more porcelain white and flawless, editing out the tiny specks of water color that went over the lines digitally using clone tool could have helped to pull it off a bit more effectively.

Personally I quite like this image myself, the design of it is very 'layout' ish, like something one might use as a journal header or something. ^^ I hope some of my comments helped and keep up the good work !

Devious Rating: 4/5
Vision: 4/5
Originality: 3/5
Technique: 4/5
Impact: 3/5

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Bright-Circle [2009-04-10 20:27:52 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely beautiful! I don't know who Emilie Autumn is, but this is the perfect combination of colours, form, style.

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LittleMissEloise [2008-12-04 14:07:52 +0000 UTC]

this is really awesome!

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c-b-f [2008-10-28 22:44:27 +0000 UTC]

i love it!
[hugs]

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JoaoAntonio [2008-10-13 16:41:07 +0000 UTC]

os labios dela sao perfeito *-*

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Said-we-were-fine [2008-10-02 15:33:51 +0000 UTC]

I love your drawing style, it's really unique and eye-catching. The way you used your media here works really well, the colours coming off the picture look good, and the fact the picture is 'unfinished' is a really nice touch ^^

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JeremiahFrost [2008-09-26 22:26:17 +0000 UTC]

Excellent drawing! So well done, and the watercolors really add alot to this piece!
I think you come up with some great titles, and this one in particular. It not totally obvious, I actually hadn't ever heard that word before, and I always enjoy learning new interesting words!
Fantastic work as always!

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Blastermind [2008-09-22 23:50:49 +0000 UTC]

great combination of drawing styles you've done a great job ^^!!!

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da-kyuu [2008-09-22 18:28:18 +0000 UTC]

Adoro os cabelos que você faz *¬*

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senjo666 [2008-09-22 11:45:50 +0000 UTC]

wow thats rly cool.

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