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AyaneShinobi β For Avary: The 5000th Kiriban
Published: 2006-03-17 17:34:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 993; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 115
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I am so sorry that this is late. I know I said I'd have this up by this [past] Monday, but I wasn't able to get onto deviantART until today for some strange reason. I don't know what it was, but the servers in this area wouldn't allow many of us Net users to get onto certain sites: this being one of them. It was so frustrating because I had finished this days ago & wanted to submit it, but I couldn't. But I am just so glad that the site is back up.Yes, this is for , who was my 5000th page viewer, thus the winner of the Kiriban. He requested I draw this, so I did.
(I hope this was similar to how you imagined it, avary!) I'm so sorry that I couldn't do this in watercolour. I don't have any watercolour paper at the moment, so I had to resort to mecha pencil. Please forgive the horrid background (I'm not too good with scenery), but yes, Avary, Katrina, Elliot, & Christie are in a park. 
And please forgive the dodgy scan; there was nothing I could do to fix it. ;_; Nothing at all. But I still hope you like it~! As for translations for what they are saying, here they are (You read it from right to left!):
Christie: You are cute...no...handsome, Elliot.
Elliot: R...Really?
Katrina: W-what!? That cheap woman~!
Avary: Calm down, Kat-chan. *Fu fu* This is wonderful~!
These characters are not mine. The ninja on the right belongs to & Katrina-chan belongs to . Elliot & Christie are characters from Team Ninja/ Tecmo's Dead or Alive 4 game (on X-Box 360).
This illustration is drawn with a simple mecha pencil.
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NO waAAaAAAAaAaAy O_O.... just a simple mech pencil?! Dude ayane-san, even WITH a mech pencil you're on the top with detail. the shading and everything is wicked 
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For a second I thought that one was Mai from KOF. It's a great pic.
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Yeah, in pencil, her outfit does look a bit like Mai's. It's actually pink & white...Katrina's outfit that is!
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Yeah, of course. I wonder, would Mai look good in those colors?
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ohhh....i love it how you wrote the hiragana/katakana (i suck at that but still trying...XD)...
very cool on the shadings!! ^^ love it also!!
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Thanks for all the wonderful comments, konrei-sama~! 
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awww...no probbies!!
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I like it, this is nice! And you can write japanese very well!!!
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Danke schΓΆn, Yurumi. I'm very happy you like it. I am also glad you say that I can write Japanese well. I try to write it as neat as possible. I've been writing it for a couple of years, but as for the language itself, I still have so much to learn. Especially with Kanji...now that is very hard!
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My god you even speak german!
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Oh, I only know just a little bit of Deutsch. I wish I knew the entire language! That way I could speak to my friends from Germany in their native language! I should get my friend Benedikt (he's a foreign exchange student at my university) to teach me some. It sounds so cool when he starts saying stuff in German! 
Oh yes, Japanese is very difficult. Well, lucky you that you have Japanese classes at your university. I wish there was one at my university. All we have is Spanish & I'm taking Spanish II right now. It's hard to me! There are so many tenses, it's unbelievable. Oh wow, 100 Kanji to learn by July! Good luck! I've been studying Japanese for a while & I am ashamed to admit I don't even know 100 Kanji.
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LOL, I would like to continue spanish, but this semester I really don't have time... u_u I had 5 years spanish at school, but I can't really speak oit, it's so frustrating
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Your art work is so awesome!!
Great shading and detail. I've never seen a ninja eating mcdonald's before I always thought they would eat more healthy stuff
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Ooooh, don't worry about a "late" comment! I find that no comment is ever late! I am always happy & ever grateful when people leave a comment. It means a lot of me to read people's thoughts & feedback on my artwork.
lol, yeah, ninja eating McDonalds. Well, McD does seem rather popular around the globe & from what I've seen/read/heard, McD is kinda popular in Japan, since it is an "American food"! *Laughs* Oh...*Laughs again*, that's so funny what you said: "I always thought they would eat more healthy stuff". I'm sure they do, but hey, we all love a little fast food once in a while, eh?
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I used to work in a pub and I remember that a film crew from Japan were filming a documentary on English Pubs, it was well funny!!
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I'm not a fan of McDonald's either. But like I said, since it's rather popular, I just thought I'd make them eat it. Fish 'n' Chips are pretty good; I haven't had them for a while, but from what I can remember, it's pretty good stuff.
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Thanks! I'm glad you found this illustration amusing.
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Thank you for commenting on this. I really appreciate it.
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very cute! and funny ^ ^ Ahh I love elliot, I'm gonna cosplay him at either Anime Next or Otakon : DDD
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Oh, you're going to cosplay Elliot for an upcoming con? When is Anime Next? (I'm not too familiar with that convention.) But I do know about Otakon, since it's the biggest con on the East Coast. Which outfit of his are you planning on making? I'm also jumping onto the DOA4 cosplay bandwagon; I'll be making Kasumi's c4 costume for the upcoming AX in July. Sadly though, I won't be joining the large DOA group again, because I'm going to be in Trinity Blood on that day instead. But hey, I'd choose TB over DOA, because TB rocks & it's really rare to see a lot of TB cosplay in the U.S. So far, the group we have planned is pretty big.
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I'm planning on his first player(?) outfit, the white with the blue silk with the silver dragon on the front : D Anime Next is pretty small, but it's close to where I live. It's in Secaucus NJ, It's going on june 16-18, I think. you can get more info at [link] : DDD
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WOW AWESOME PIC!! And I think The background was really cool!! ^_^
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Doumo arigatou gozaimasu, Xenosnake, for commenting on this. I am glad you believe it to be a good illustration & that the background is good as well.
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Cool. I like the shading, it's so soft and fluid. Don't worry the background is nice as is. Your attention to detail is also good to point out as well. Those little ducks in the water, heheh, so cute. Mmmm... McDonalds... The dialogue is funny as well.
Excellent work and do keep it up (^-^)!
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Thank you very much for your nice comments all the time.
Ha ha, yeah, I just had to put ducks in the water. At first, the lake was just so barren & I had wanted to put a heron in it, but I don't really know what herons look like. So I just settled with a duck & her ducklings.
As for the McDonalds, I wanted to make them eat In-N-Out Burger (a really popular hamburger joint in Southern California), but I figured, "Wait a second...In-N-Out isn't really well known to the majority of people!" Especially for ninja in Japan! lol. So I settled for McD, since it seems like everybody around the globe knows of this fast food chain!
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Heheh, tru. Inside-out burgers... sounds pretty tasty to me. Hey, they shoulda' ate out at Ninja Burger ! Heheh.
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Ah? Inside-out burger? Vat iz that? Oh ho ho, In-N-Out isn't inside out. It's just the name of the place. It's so awesome. Even the celebrities love it! I forgot which awards show it was (I think it was the Academy Awards) & they were talking to Jack Nicholson & asked him why he was leaving the banquet there. Well, his reply was that he wanted real food...which was the In-N-Out burger joint! 
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Heheh, sorry, I could read that wrong... Man, I guess I'm not in the loop... Thanx for correcting me. Well, now I want an In-N-Out burger, heheh. That's so cool to have celebrity recognition.
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I love it I laugh everytime I see that part on DOA4... Christie: come to me boy...
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*Laughs too* Yeah, Christie sure seems like she enjoys teasing Elliot. In this illustration, it looks funny, because it just looks odd that Christie would be seducing somebody as young as Elliot. *Laughs* It is a very amusing concept that Avary came up with; I did enjoy illustrating this.
Oh yeah, double thanks for the 
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Oh man! Fantastic picture! ^___^ Very well drawn! Impressive art as always!
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Oh my cheeb, you always leave the most wonderful comments on my artwork. It makes me happy! Thanks!
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No problem, my dear! ^___^
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Thanks! Pencil work is truely a lot of work...very time consuming. The problem with pencil is that it likes to smudge and smear, so I'm constantly erasing quite a bit!
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I'm glad you find this picture hilarious & thank you so much for the 
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Wow, really nice pencil work! I don't really know what it is about it but everything fits very well together.
By the way, I have a little present for your that I just keep forgetting to scan!
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Zankyuu for the kind words.
A present for me? Wow, I can't wait to see what it is!
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Once again the shading is lovely. The background looks rather nice if you ask me
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Thank you very much. I am very glad you believe the background to be just fine. That makes me feel better, knowing that you (and others) say it's fine. *Phew*
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Aye! Thank you so much AyaneShinobi! This is just too awesome for words. 
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I am very glad you like it! And I'm very happy that you do like it in black & white, too.
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*slapping and punching Christie like hell* >< I HATE YOU!! STAY AWAY MY DARLING ELLIOT!!! I HATE YOU I HATE YOU BLOODIE OLD CHRISTIE!!!!!!
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lol, your comments makes me laugh.
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