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Published: 2004-07-31 18:01:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 71
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It's like a pen mark on a perfect face.A messed up drawing nobody understands.When it happens to you,you want it to be perfect.But when you find out that it isn't all it is cracked up to be you lose your mind and cry over it again and again.Your friends want to know how it feels but only the people that has felt of this really knows.Late phone calls,long talks,holding hands,making out,just to show how much you love them,but when they get fed up with you they leaveΒ Β and never return.Love wasn't as strong as you thought it was.He told you lies to get you with him,he spoke of love as a gift-a time for sharing and caring that only you two can have.
Spent cold nights huddled together-warm kisses upon your nose and soft lips but those thoughts kept lingering in your mind.'Does he really love me?' 'Will he ever leave me?' 'Is he really worth it?' 'Are we meant to be together?'.You ask him all these questions and more;he tells you that he loves you and will NEVER leave you-you gain trust from him and when you do..there he goes.He leaves you,forgets what you two once had,and when you least expect it,he comes right back.Promising flowers,candies,jewelry.He wants you to be with him again,do you really want to go through this once more? He doesn't understand that when you break one heart,that is really all you can have.
But you still go looking for more because you feel like you could find the right one to make you happy.Somebody you just really need,but deep down you know it is all gonnd end yet you still hold on to it with great passion and trust-hoping tomorrow won't be the same as yesterday.
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Comments: 6
junkauge [2008-02-18 12:05:33 +0000 UTC]
wow, this is good ^^ you write well! and with truth!
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Azuri In reply to daylight-dancer [2004-08-01 04:28:50 +0000 UTC]
What type of song? :blank:
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daylight-dancer In reply to Azuri [2004-08-02 03:50:02 +0000 UTC]
It just seemed like a song to me...that's all. ( :
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DarkKnight5204 [2004-07-31 21:18:53 +0000 UTC]
wow this is a very truthful piece and it makes me realize all the horrible things i've done.......very nice writing
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