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BabblingTurtle — Que es Amor? by-nd
Published: 2010-06-14 22:13:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 313; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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Description Que Lastimo! No recuerdo que es amor! How and I forget something as powerful as love. I can say it in many different languages; Graim Thu, Ich Liebe Dich, Jeg elsker dig, Ik hou van je, Mahal Kita, Je t'aime, Seni Seviyorum, Yo te amo, Is tu mo ghra. Why did I forget what it meant? Perhaps it is because I no longer had you by my side, I could no longer gaze into your eyes, I could no longer feel your sweet lips. Maybe, it is because I can no longer hold you in my arms, hear your voice. We used to hold each other for hours, just laying there in the comfort of the others embrace. I remember our hands intermingled and our fingers interlocked as we stood in the rain. We used to whisper in the winds. Now you have gone out of my sight. I retreat back into the gloom and dread of this melancholy cave, remembering all those sweet times, and seeing none of the same genuine honesty in those that now surround me. These girls tell me they love me, but how can they if I never gave them the chance. Other girls tell me they will love me, but they are laden with treachery and lust. I look for the simple and the pure, as we used to have. When all we needed was rain, and we would dance through the darkened skies until dawn. To these girls, this is not enough. I remember days when a kiss was enough to part with and we'd both be satisfied. Now, a peck is considered play, and true romance lies only in the heart of desire. I believe in a time where all we would need is to hold each other, one in the others arms, whispering sweet nothings and falling asleep feeling secure and loved. Now, I hear only of sleep as the darkest parts of the night waking to the shrieking of impatient lovers. What happened to the pure, simplistic, sweet, and romantic side of love we used to share? Uncorrupted with greed, desire, and lust, where a flower means hello and a hand means I pick you. Uncomplicated, like us standing together, looking deep into each others eyes, your dark hair blowing in the wind, flowing like Hershey's chocolate syrup, your lips soft and sweet like candy, your silk skin beneath my coarse hand. I'd do anything to have those days back. Turn the time back to before I had to leave, forced to relocate. Everyone knew, but only you came to wish me farewell. So, it was the last treasured moment looming in my mind. You cared enough to see me go, to watch me ship off, to see me for one last time. I would turn time back, if only I knew how, just so I could look deeply into your eyes and know I meant the words, "I love you."
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Comments: 26

MariaWillhelm [2010-06-19 04:11:58 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful! Excellently written. I thouroughly enjoyed it. I completely agree with everything you wrote!

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BabblingTurtle In reply to MariaWillhelm [2010-06-19 04:23:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the critique. I love getting feedback from people. I am glad you liked it aswell... thanks for the fav too...

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Amailleia [2010-06-15 20:55:49 +0000 UTC]

lol

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BabblingTurtle In reply to Amailleia [2010-06-15 21:04:58 +0000 UTC]

hahaha.. how are you?

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Amailleia In reply to BabblingTurtle [2010-06-15 21:07:46 +0000 UTC]

Well i'm bout to write something that'll tell ya^^ gave myself inspiration

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BabblingTurtle In reply to Amailleia [2010-06-15 21:08:51 +0000 UTC]

good... take your time but know I can't wait...

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Amailleia In reply to BabblingTurtle [2010-06-15 21:18:39 +0000 UTC]

lol. I could take that so many directions.

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BabblingTurtle In reply to Amailleia [2010-06-15 21:21:20 +0000 UTC]

WOW... hahaha... It was amazing... I loved it....

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Amailleia [2010-06-15 03:48:00 +0000 UTC]

OMAWWWWW!!!!!!! That's gotta be one of the sweetest things I've ever read... *kawai*

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BabblingTurtle In reply to Amailleia [2010-06-15 09:40:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much... I'm glad I made something you like on the romantic side.

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Ever-Lasting-Spirit [2010-06-14 22:26:20 +0000 UTC]

So adorable~

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BabblingTurtle In reply to Ever-Lasting-Spirit [2010-06-14 22:27:14 +0000 UTC]

hahaha... is for your contest... I wrote it twice... (stupid internet) glad you liked it... hhahahaha

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Ever-Lasting-Spirit In reply to BabblingTurtle [2010-06-14 22:30:22 +0000 UTC]

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BabblingTurtle In reply to Ever-Lasting-Spirit [2010-06-14 22:33:41 +0000 UTC]

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Ever-Lasting-Spirit In reply to BabblingTurtle [2010-06-14 22:35:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the contribution~

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BabblingTurtle In reply to Ever-Lasting-Spirit [2010-06-14 22:36:33 +0000 UTC]

hey man... you put something that wickedly open out there and Imma jump on it... lol your welcome

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Ever-Lasting-Spirit In reply to BabblingTurtle [2010-06-14 22:37:39 +0000 UTC]

lol

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BabblingTurtle In reply to Ever-Lasting-Spirit [2010-06-14 22:39:48 +0000 UTC]

hahaha... what you up to?

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Ever-Lasting-Spirit In reply to BabblingTurtle [2010-06-14 22:41:03 +0000 UTC]

running rampant xD and you??

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BabblingTurtle In reply to Ever-Lasting-Spirit [2010-06-14 22:43:29 +0000 UTC]

pretty much keeping you on your toes with all these messages.. hahaha

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Ever-Lasting-Spirit In reply to BabblingTurtle [2010-06-14 22:48:11 +0000 UTC]

lmao yea but I happy it keeps me busy

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BabblingTurtle In reply to Ever-Lasting-Spirit [2010-06-14 22:54:09 +0000 UTC]

hahaha... yes yes... But its funny.

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Ever-Lasting-Spirit In reply to BabblingTurtle [2010-06-14 22:56:26 +0000 UTC]

lol yes yes xD

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BabblingTurtle In reply to Ever-Lasting-Spirit [2010-06-14 22:59:01 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha

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Ever-Lasting-Spirit In reply to BabblingTurtle [2010-06-14 23:00:29 +0000 UTC]

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BabblingTurtle [2010-06-14 22:16:38 +0000 UTC]

here is the link to the contest... [link]

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