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Honestly, I really think what I've written here sucks. But my mind isn't what it should be lately. So, this is what I've come up with. Sorry.Characters (c) their owners.
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Veejay stumbled out of the delivery room back into the waiting room,"That's my bro and sister-in-law! I HAVE AS MUCH RIGHT AS ANYONE TO BE IN THERE!"
The only response was the soft swing of the two way doors,"...fuckers."
Veejay hadn't been in the delivery room long before being tossed back out. Only the father of the hoglets was allowed in. Veejay was curious as hell. She had met with the soon to be born Jayden Hedgehog some time ago when she'd came from the future on her 'vacation' which seemed to consist entirely of harassing everyone.
Veejay clearly remembered Jayden saying she was an only child then, and was curious why Windy was about to give birth to twins. The only answer she'd gotten was from her brother. His genetic disposition was for twins because his mother, his real mother, whom they'd met some time ago, had been one. The meeting with his parents had not been a pleasant one.
That was a memory for another time, however. Windy and Base were going to have twins, why hadn't Jayden mentioned a brother?
Veejay sighed and looked down the hall, back to the door, and to the seat next to her.
Jayden sat there,"Hi auntie!"
Veejay blinked a few times, Jayden didn't disappear,"You're back? Are you an illusion?"
Veejay felt the bone crushing sugary hug of doom Jayden had always managed to perform, this wasn't a hallucination, but it was painful!
"Let...me...DOWN!"
Jayden's arms opened, dropping Veejay into her seat, she sat with the same, big overly happy grin she always wore,"Okay!"
Veejay composed herself,"Alright...okay. You're here, you're about to be born now. You never mentioned having a brother."
Jayden looked around as if checking for someone,"Auntie...I didn't have one."
Veejay rolled her eyes,"Windy's about to pop a double and you're claiming you didn't have a brother?!"
Jayden poked Veejay's nose,"YOU played matchmaker, I told you not to. Now I do."
Veejay stared at Jayden's finger, then swatter her hand away,"Oh so it's MY fault?"
"When I said less presents, I didn't mean mom and dad got cheap! When I went back, I found I had a brother. I didn't remember anything about him, anything about the childhood we supposedly shared. But now its like I remember it one way, where its just me, but I remember it another way WITH a brother."
Veejay blinked, this was hurting her head,"...so you're being assimilated into a new future?"
"Sorta like that. I wanted to let you know what was going on and all that."
Veejay leaned against her chair, putting her hands behind her head,"Okay...so somehow me playing matchmaker changed this up. That's silly, but I'll bite my tongue on this. So what's this kid like?"
Jayden smirked,"Not telling you. No more spoilers for you missy!"
Veejay smirked,"That anyway to talk to your dear old auntie?"
Jayden stood up,"Nah. But I brought you a gift!"
"A gift?"
Jayden reached into the cuff of her glove and pulled something small and square from her glove,"I'm not coming back to the past anymore, too risky. So, here's something to remember us by."
Veejay looked at her hand, and took the piece of paper. Jayden hugged Veejay again.
"See you in a few minutes, auntie. Love you!"
Jayden gave Veejay a quick peck on the cheek and waved goodbye. Veejay watched as she trotted away down the hall of the hospital. Veejay looked at the piece of paper.
It was a photo, with two young hedgehogs on it, Jayden she recognized, the male she didn't. He was blue and black, like Windy, with a similar design to his tail. He wore clothes that seemed a mishmash of Base's attire and Windy's. His eyes were a leaf green color. While he did seem genuinely happy in the photo, there was an adventurous glare in his pose and eyes.
Veejay smirked,"Aunt of two now am I? So, what's your name, kid?"
The doctor came from the two way doors,"Ma'am, your brother would like to see you."
Veejay looked at the photo one more time, tucked it into a coat pocket and walked into the delivery room.
Base sat in a chair by the bed, the young Jayden in his arms. Windy, though looking tired and like she'd been through quite the ordeal, was smiling, holding the little male hoglet.
Veejay crossed the room and stood next to Windy,"So, who're these two tots?"
Base smiled at Veejay. The look in his face, she hadn't seen such a pure blissful look in his eyes since the first day he and Windy had been a couple.
Base looked at his sleeping daughter, a tuft of quills on her forehead,"Jayden Emma Hedgehog."
Veejay smirked, Gonna spoil you rotten kid.
She looked down to Windy,"What about the two for one, here?"
Windy looked to Veejay and leaned into her pillow, with a tired smile,"Theo Aidan Hedgehog."
Veejay smiled, Gonna spoil your ass too, kid. Welcome to the family.
The End
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Comments: 24
GroxDevlin [2011-04-17 07:37:52 +0000 UTC]
Glad to find out who that was in the last pic of yours I commented on. Jayden's twin brother Theo, I can see the two of them getting into so much trouble together. And giving Base a headache all at the same time. Good job, Commented and Favorited.
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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to GroxDevlin [2011-04-17 08:00:45 +0000 UTC]
They're definately going to be a devious duo. XD
Thanks. :3
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NinjaHaku21 [2011-04-16 02:42:31 +0000 UTC]
Love the perspective! 8D Now time to read the story!
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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to NinjaHaku21 [2011-04-16 02:56:36 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I used to do drawings like that in school for fun. Hand drawing a hand drawing a---you get the idea.
Have fun reading it. Easily the shortest I've written.
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DangerousRadical [2011-04-15 01:02:44 +0000 UTC]
Fucking with the laws of nature had a consequence, and I don't doubt Vee-Jay knew it and feels just a twinge of guilt about it, but seeing that photo probably told her everything she needed to know - "Twins? Well, now I got double the love to give, don't I? "
This would most likely tie in with where I'm going with the current prologue two-parter, definitely the epilogue of it, I can certainly see it.
The war comes first, as always, but family needs to be addressed, and she's been avoiding all talk of it for quite some time. Windy finding out she's pregnant, and Vee-Jay dragging the talk of parental units out of Base would likely bring the whole fiasco to the surface. I think she'd honestly consider the situation too dangerous for Windy to stay with them, and return with Base to Knothole...not realising what's been going on back there, with all the Endgame stuff. She'd be sending her brother and her future sister-in-law right into the maw of madness...
But I digress.
I love this pic so much, so simple yet speaks volumes in its simplicity. Where once there was only cavity-inducing Jayden, there's now bold and brave Theo by her side. There's something to be said for altering the future...those two WILL be spoiled utterly ROTTEN by her. Base is going to have a bloody hard time stopping her doing that...Windy I think would tolerate it...up until their teens anyway, when I'm sure Vee-Jay would present Theo with something akin to his first car (and probably get beaten up by Base, surely XD!).
Seriously, my week has been suckage central and this just brought such a grin to my mug Ta very much and all that sort of thing, big bro <3
[]
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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to DangerousRadical [2011-04-15 02:33:53 +0000 UTC]
"For you Jayden, I know how much you like to sing. So I kidnapped Mina Mongoose and threatened to remove her foot if she doesn't give you a few professional lessons!"
"Yay! Squee!"
"Theo?"
"Yes, ant Vee?"
"Here's the keys to your dad's bike."
"SCORE!"
"GODAMMIT SIS!"
Those poor souls. XD
Yeah, Base's discovery of his parents is going to yield some nasty truth's about his origins that he, nor anyone, may be really ready to take head on. I know that Rosie and Chuck are gonna want to go. They raised him, they're gonna be worried like,"Now that he's found his real parents, what if he forgets about us?"
Like most foster folks worry when that day comes.
Glad to know it perked up your week some sis. I figure if my works give at least one person a pick me up it was worth plucking the brainfarts out and slapping it down on paper. XD
I figured Veejay playing matchmaker would shift the conception date from what it was to what it is, the shift would have Windy in a different stage of fertility, and would result in Base's disposition to having twins because his genetic mother is one, come to surface, landing him with twins.
Originally Jayden was supposed to have one, but I forgot to make him. XD
Well, that's been corrected. XD
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Sunsetstarfox [2011-04-15 00:17:47 +0000 UTC]
Love it <3 Very cute. And I love the story too! You did a great job on it, whether you think so or not! <3
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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to Sunsetstarfox [2011-04-15 02:21:11 +0000 UTC]
THank you very much. Definately not one of my better writings though.
Thanks, though. :3
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razor318 [2011-04-15 00:04:48 +0000 UTC]
Yay, I was right
Anyway great story and impressive drawing as always!!
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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to razor318 [2011-04-15 02:21:39 +0000 UTC]
Yep, due to screwing with historic events, Base has double trouble now.
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razor318 In reply to Basic-Hedgehog [2011-04-15 03:55:21 +0000 UTC]
lol, I hope there'll be some drmatic and comedic drawings coming from this character
Looking forward to it
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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to razor318 [2011-04-15 11:24:39 +0000 UTC]
Maybe. Though I tend to leave the next generation alone. I've already written in that their world is more peaceful.
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razor318 [2011-04-15 00:04:48 +0000 UTC]
Yay, I was right
Anyway great story and impressive drawing as always!!
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Songal [2011-04-14 23:56:49 +0000 UTC]
Aww that's so nice of you to give Jayden a brother, maybe he can controll her sugar intake.
And the name suits him VERY well.
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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to Songal [2011-04-15 02:22:44 +0000 UTC]
Actually, originally, she was supposed to, I just got carried away with her on her own and forgot all about it. Decided it was time to correct it.
Thanks. *Colonel-Eviscerator 's idea. XD
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Songal In reply to Basic-Hedgehog [2011-04-17 22:05:27 +0000 UTC]
Ahh okay then.
Good choice too!
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Colonel-Eviscerator [2011-04-14 22:40:57 +0000 UTC]
Theodore will grow a mustache of destiny...and RIDE A WILD MOOSE
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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to Colonel-Eviscerator [2011-04-14 22:42:12 +0000 UTC]
YOU'RE A MADMAN WITH DREAMS!
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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to AdioXGen [2011-04-14 22:39:28 +0000 UTC]
Veejay, says it right in the story she get the picture.
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