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Billy-X — The Outward Signs
Published: 2005-11-03 16:49:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 217; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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i use sex as a weapon,a cold steel blade,
a puncture wound a real
terror.
i use tears to maintain my
status and my power,
i use coffee tea chocolate
microwavable dinners
to avoid talking.
nevermind my principles
find the outward signs.
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Comments: 4
ooo love it. it flows very naturally. and the use of objects to avoid developing any intimacy is excellent
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The poem exudes the emotion of the protagonist. 
--Seth
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The way you run things together... it provides a definite voice to the piece.
I also like how you don't go into explaining why things are... they just are.
Short and sweet.
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