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FIRST | PREVIOUS | NEXTCoza's App: [link]
Opponent Rhett's App: [link]
Casper the Boyfriend: [link]
patlani has no time for your gay kisses, boys!!
idk if i'm all that happy with the dialogue here eegghh. might get changed later
edit: was indeed changed. took out the convenient narration in the last panel and added a few black panels cause yeah. hopefully this works a little better?
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Ah, I just found you here on devart and I am absolutely in love with your style, expecially your backgrounds
Also your concepts and designs of Pokemon are really interesting! The way you draw the Rapidash tail, me likes :3
Oh, and I do not know, if you care, but "Mein Leibe" is wrong. I assumed it is german for "My Love" but yours turned more into a "my body" x)
"My Love" is "Meine Liebe", or if you want to specify that it is a male lover "Mein Liebster".
In case you ever need that term again
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ah, thank you!! my german is next to non-existant, so i will definitely remember that one (and edit this page at some point, ahah)
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Eeeeeeh so cute and adorable and all the fluff.
Patlani is not amused. Haha
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aww young love
new couples doing all that new couple stuff
kind of foreboding cliff hanger at the end there though
keep up the great work
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Incredibly sweet 
Side note because you made comments about it before, Your ponies have gotten better!! Great length in the back and a nice job showing eagerness on the horses part with the neck leaning forward and picking up the slack of the reins. That's standard body-language for a horse that's really in-tune with his rider!
The only critique I have may be in conflict with your style, so I don't know if it's useful at all! But the way the lower-jaw attaches to the neck seems to be what makes your comics have a more stylistic feeling, and less real (specifically Coza). But it is still falling into the realm of cartoon and I kind of love that about your work, so I don't know if it's useful information or not. [link] <-- This is an amazing site for seeing human anatomy in a very easy and accessible pov. Caution, Greek penis's everywhere though!
Good luck! I'm sure you'll do great!
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ahh! you always have such great links and critiques for me and i'm really grateful for them!! thanks so much for your awesome comments, they're very encouraging!!
but yes, i'm trying to achieve a somewhat cartoon-ish style with realistic proportions and anatomy, so i will definitely look over that facebook page! and i'm happy to hear my horses have gotten better, haha :'D they're still tricky, but getting gradually less frustrating to draw!
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It is an absolute pleasure my dear! 
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Patlani has no time for your makeout session, boys.
Oh no I can feel the sad coming oh no RETREAT RETREAT
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SADS IMMINENT
BRACE FOR IMPACT
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stay on your toes guys
WHERE GOING IN HOT
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patlani does not ship it
dont be hatin patty
no but this is adorable tho im getting a cavity
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patlani only approves of gay if its stained glass windows
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*gross sobbing* No Coza run away with your bard boyfran
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nop
prepare for the sad
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bex y do u hurt me dis way.
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i do it specifically to hurt YOU bear
i sit there drawing and i'm thinking
"HAHAH THIS WILL PAIN BEAR SO MUCH"
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I LOVE YOU TOO BEAR BUT
I ALSO ENJOYING PAINING YOU WITH THESE SORTS OF FEELS SO
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