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Coza's app: [link]

CAMEOS

Milena: [link]
Yao: [link]
Robin: [link]
Nina: [link]
Marcus: [link]

awww snap it's a draggiin
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Comments: 29

Mechadrago [2013-06-19 01:33:42 +0000 UTC]

Hi yes I would like to steal your audinos and salamences please, their designs are too great.

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HopelessAce [2013-06-05 20:38:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm just gonna love every pokemon you ever draw because they all look so gorgeous in you style. ;w;
The salamance looks fantastic. It's got a vaguely salamander (only just now noticing the name similarity) look to it that really works well. Something seems off about the poor thing's wing though.
The rain! The rain~ The way you drew it looks great. Especially with the droplets rolling off the salamance.
Could not help but laugh at Milena and Yao's response.

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elanorepenn [2013-05-30 14:57:54 +0000 UTC]

Oooh! An update~! -puts hands under chin and eagerly leans forward-

Them's is some sexy t-intersections you've got there on that dragon! And I like this cleaner(assuming faster?)coloring style!! It's working well for you

The only thing I see as something slightly unusual are the two thumbs on the salamence!

[link] <-- This is a dog foot, but it shows the tendons which I love for creating volume on my creatures But I'm not sure if you're going for that or a more "raptor" style foot?
[link] <--- fleshing it out more, but it's one of the few birds that doesns't have what I like to call natural "derp" feet When drawing the feet of an animal thinking of how the foot leaves prints on the ground is a huge step for showing the weight and character of a creature. Since the ground is wet and the salamence is huge, it might be sinking into the ground a little! But for right now we'll pretend that it's still hard ground I know you don't have critiques requested, but I love getting things like this, so I hope you don't mind

Your human anatomy has gotten better too! Are you practicing more or are you taking figure drawing?

I'm excited to see where this is headed!!

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biscuitcrumbs In reply to elanorepenn [2013-05-31 00:23:30 +0000 UTC]

hi!! thanks again for always giving feedback, i do appreciate it ;v;

with the salamence's feet, i was going for something of a hybrid between paws and raptor feet, hence the weird thumbs on either side! and it is indeed hard ground, more or less rock covered in a thin layer of green, though he's digging up a soft patch in the next page. it's all terribly convenient, oops!

thanks for the references though, you always link the best ones, aaahhh ! and ee, i do hope my anatomy has gotten better! i've been looking into figure drawing classes but there's barely any around here, which is a shame. i usually just end up doodling poses, but it seems to have done a bit of good!

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Lyran-Wolf [2013-05-29 13:43:23 +0000 UTC]

o_o OMG

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tera633 [2013-05-29 08:26:13 +0000 UTC]

Wait....is that....is he digging....0.0 (omg)

Bootiful artz as always. 83

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xXShiningstar [2013-05-29 06:05:54 +0000 UTC]

IT LOOKS LIKE TOOTHELESS <3 <3 <3
Also OMG her name is Astrid- Toothless+Astrid WE JUST NEED HICCUP NOW!

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failefayce [2013-05-28 19:49:59 +0000 UTC]

Your panel composition is really good in this strip especially. Sounds odd to say, since they're all simple boxes, but I'm never confused on where I should go next or what order things happen in. More importantly, the simple panels show off your art better than complex ones would. It works better with your art style and allows it to speak for itself.

I do enjoy the few dynamic panels we get on this page, as often you only see them during battle and specifically action-y scenes. Despite the fact that this scene is tense, yet free of action in the most obvious sense, your two more dynamic panels work well within it.

I have to say, though, my favourite panel is the one of the salamence from far off. That thing is huge.

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Sesshywolf [2013-05-28 19:33:46 +0000 UTC]

Quit making me love your work so much! you make all the pokemon look so awesome!

that Salamance

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The-Hybrid-Mobian [2013-05-28 17:24:55 +0000 UTC]

oh noooo salamence baby what's wrong with your wing ;A; yet another gorgeous page, i'm excited to see the rest!

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biscuitcrumbs In reply to The-Hybrid-Mobian [2013-05-28 17:30:17 +0000 UTC]

AH HA HA you noticed! you shall see next page uvu thank you!!

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The-Hybrid-Mobian In reply to biscuitcrumbs [2013-05-28 23:00:33 +0000 UTC]

you mean no one else noticed? ahh gosh i thought it was obvious from how it was dragging its wing around :c *sits down wiggles eagerly in anticipation yes*

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bassistforlife27 [2013-05-28 17:14:11 +0000 UTC]

I love the Salamence so much. It makes me want to take it home with me, it looks so sad.

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biscuitcrumbs In reply to bassistforlife27 [2013-05-28 17:30:31 +0000 UTC]

aaahhh thank you ;v; he is quite sad yes!!

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bassistforlife27 In reply to biscuitcrumbs [2013-05-28 17:36:24 +0000 UTC]

Please if you haven't already decided make him Coza's friend.

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CinnamoonAkia [2013-05-28 17:03:31 +0000 UTC]

nina get your booty back here with coza he's gonna have a draggin unlike your stupid dork of a brother who has a flame weasel and two dogs.

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biscuitcrumbs In reply to CinnamoonAkia [2013-05-28 17:29:57 +0000 UTC]

dfdfdfdfd he has an overprotective fire horse and Not A Night Fury

clearly safer

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Mad-Plot-Bunny [2013-05-28 16:52:07 +0000 UTC]

Loving it.

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biscuitcrumbs In reply to Mad-Plot-Bunny [2013-05-28 17:02:46 +0000 UTC]

eee thank you!!

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Mad-Plot-Bunny In reply to biscuitcrumbs [2013-05-28 17:10:13 +0000 UTC]

WITCHCRAFT! HOW DO YOU MAKE COLORED ENTRIES SO FAST! *takes notes*
Also you're welcome.

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cocoaferret [2013-05-28 16:11:55 +0000 UTC]

//touches this

I REALLY love how you designed Salamence- or just, you know, every pokemon that appears in your comics ever!
HNNNN bex this is just like, amazing work as usual uvu

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biscuitcrumbs In reply to cocoaferret [2013-05-28 17:02:03 +0000 UTC]

dhofghf OH WOW senpai likes my work

i'm gonna go over here and squeal a bit ; v ; thank you much!!

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TwiliShewolf [2013-05-28 16:11:50 +0000 UTC]

Love that salamence. Especially what you with the head "gills"

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biscuitcrumbs In reply to TwiliShewolf [2013-05-28 17:02:25 +0000 UTC]

aahh thank you!! he turned out looking like toothless but eh, it's a good look for a salamence at least!

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TwiliShewolf In reply to biscuitcrumbs [2013-05-28 17:32:11 +0000 UTC]

Haha I kind of saw the nightfury there too, but it's not bad!

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Snowbound-Becca [2013-05-28 15:33:39 +0000 UTC]

Faving this 'cause
A; Audino are adorable in your style.
B; That Salamence... I want it so badly, it's awesome

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biscuitcrumbs In reply to Snowbound-Becca [2013-05-28 17:02:33 +0000 UTC]

dfdgfd aahhh man thank you!! ;v;

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ScalpelUser [2013-05-28 15:28:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh Coza, we love you. And I love that Salmence <3 so rarely does the design appeal to me but this is really well done and you're doing great with the rain, I particularly like it on the Salmence in the final panel.

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biscuitcrumbs In reply to ScalpelUser [2013-05-28 15:30:38 +0000 UTC]

oh shucks, thank you ;;!!

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