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Published: 2003-10-16 05:07:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 117; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 15
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I can't remember his faceHis eyes ellude me
But I remember the warmth of their gaze
His hair only traces my memory
Still I can feel it soft gathered between my fingers
The shape of him escapes me
But curled up as a baby
I can feel him beside me
Laying on my back, he is atop me
Limbs tangled and skin pressing
Someone passes me in a crowded store
My heart races
I smell him
I can't rememeber his face
All my memory has left to me is his smile:
White teeth shown through soft lips
Pulled back in a cheshire grin
This I cannot forget
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Comments: 2
snakeeyesx [2003-10-16 05:40:06 +0000 UTC]
excellent proytal of emotion, you get your point across very well and create a vivid image is the reader's eye, excellent job...
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bitbybyte In reply to snakeeyesx [2003-10-16 07:19:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your kind comment about my poem. I'm glad someone else can see what I try to put out there. Thank you again.
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