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Published: 2003-05-20 07:34:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 181; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 8
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what is and what will never bepass by my thoughts of reality
i can only sit and wait for you to come to me
take me i am yours
taste this bead of sweat as it falls
pass your hand over this flesh as it calls
throw your body against these deep hidden walls
take me i am yours
see this life all this pride and shame
watch it burn into a bright blue flame
give me hope come and stake your claim
take me i am yours
break me to mend me
straighten me to bend me
leave me to end me
take me i am yours
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beautiful...I'll even give you a WOW on that one...great work.
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This has a beautiful cadence to it. I could sing it It's beautiful, raw emotion. I'm sorry you have to feel such though. sometimes the misery can be just as beautiful as the joy.
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what is and what will never be
pass by my thoughts of reality
I really like that; sounds like something I'd come up with
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reading this poem was an absoluetly beautiful experience. and i say experience because it reads so easy, it is felt. wonderful job, +fav.
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