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Published: 2003-05-20 07:22:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 128; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description
red flushed fleshcool air
contrast contact
movement
slow
wet
pressure
deep
tense holding
gripping sheets
hot
pulsing
rolling
end over
end over
end.
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Comments: 4
pyriel [2003-06-16 06:56:46 +0000 UTC]
I could spew some wordy critique....but there is no need. This is an excellent piece. It says everything that is needed to feel what was behind the words.
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geowulf [2003-05-20 14:54:20 +0000 UTC]
If the section name wasn't on this poem I would have thought it was about trying to sleep in Arizona with no air conditioning. Just kidding.
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