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Published: 2012-07-15 16:18:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 119; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description WORK IN PROGRESS.
Character reference in progress! c: This is just a simple sketch. BEWARE YOU GUYS I drew nipples fff oh no.
I found a sketch of this girl form 8-22-2011 and decided to revamp her a little bit, and I see massive improvement.
She is a deer x feline x rabbit hybrid. c:

DO NOT USE, CLAIM AS YOUR OWN, OR REDISTRIBUTE IN ANY WAY.

Constructive critiques only, please. And at least try to be nice. I'm trying to open up to critiques more for improvement.

Art and character © *Prolonging (me)
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Comments: 11

Ekc6 [2012-07-16 21:03:22 +0000 UTC]

The anatomy is great in this picture the legs are really well done and there is the perfect amount of fluff
I love the tail and antlers
*also pfffff cannot believe that paper isn't black from erasing XDDDDD I always draw things to dark then erase and then well smudges smudges everywhere you have mad skillz*
*cough* ahem


the only things I would say would need a little practice is maybe making the face more I really don't know how to put it you know pronounced and noticeable and one last thing to notice about the pic the perspective with the tail in front of the arm it is a very easy thing to do just do not loose sight of where a body part is placed verses the other anatomy wise and hey I might be very wrong but it is what I picked up
<3 this is a great sketch and I really enjoy what you have to share with us all on this website (end my on critique)

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nicolastrent [2012-07-16 00:56:13 +0000 UTC]

Take this with a grain of salt, because I am by no means a master at anatomy rofl. Your drawings are precious...I them. The only thing I could noticeably see that was a little off is that the torso must be longer. If you just cut it right where the butt starts and brought it down a little, it'd be perfect. Also, the boobies connect to the arm pit. So the left boob (stage left) should be much more to the left. And the last thing, which is more of a personal preference (and it's something I've noticed a lot of anthro artists do) is draw the calf a little shorter. It's not *quite* as long as a human. I've """redlined""" (put many quotes because by no means is this the best example in the world...it's just how I would draw it ) your drawing

I only drew one antler because I was more focused on the body. The best thing to do is have a picture of a person open in kind of the same pose as what you're drawing next to you, so you can see the difference in proportions.

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She's really adorable, though :') The antlers are such an awesome touch!

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bittersweetbunny In reply to nicolastrent [2012-07-16 03:02:12 +0000 UTC]

This was so helpful ;o;
I need to work on the breasts I know fff and I wanted to do a neck but she's so fluffy
And I try to do long legs, because I have them xD Heh.
Thank you so much!!

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nicolastrent In reply to bittersweetbunny [2012-07-16 17:07:25 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Yeah, the leg thing was my lame personal preference...definitely keep her with long legs...it's cute! I'm glad it helped ^.^

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Arrin-Wolf [2012-07-15 20:50:23 +0000 UTC]

all of your characters are really pretty asdfafg

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bittersweetbunny In reply to Arrin-Wolf [2012-07-15 21:31:25 +0000 UTC]

Asdfghjkl Danny. Thank you!!

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Z-A-D-Y [2012-07-15 17:04:16 +0000 UTC]

so pwetty

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flaaffeh [2012-07-15 16:28:50 +0000 UTC]

this looks really great so far!

do you mind if i critique you a little or..?

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bittersweetbunny In reply to flaaffeh [2012-07-15 16:29:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you bby!

Don't mind at all! I'd appreciate it. ;;
(trying to open up to them more, but let me make a critique feature first heheh)

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flaaffeh In reply to bittersweetbunny [2012-07-15 16:30:33 +0000 UTC]

okay

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bittersweetbunny In reply to flaaffeh [2012-07-15 16:31:04 +0000 UTC]

Critique away c;

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