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Published: 2016-11-09 19:29:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 466; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Hm, I hope the internal narration is pretty straightforward. I'm hoping I'll be able to give the characters a good bit of internal dialogue, but I'm a bit wary of it as A) it's easy to do badly and B) there are a lot of characters whose viewpoints I want to share. I suppose if this doesn't work there's always making the chapters be distinct in which of the MCs is allowed to share their thoughts.Oh well. Complicated author things. On with the story!
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Comments: 4
TwiddleMcScrub [2017-08-27 18:29:30 +0000 UTC]
THIS IS THE TYPE FONT MY SCHOOL USED OML
*Insert traumatic flashbacks of overly happy principal
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BlindJacketKing In reply to TwiddleMcScrub [2017-08-27 20:13:30 +0000 UTC]
HA HA HA ENJOY YOUR FONT-BASED PTSD
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TwiddleMcScrub In reply to BlindJacketKing [2017-08-29 01:19:24 +0000 UTC]
GOOD MORNING STUDENTS I HAVE SOME VERY SPECIAL BIRTHDAYS TO ANNOUNCE TO YOU TODAY
AhhhHWHhhhH!
CAN I HAVE THREE STRONG EIGHTH GRADE BOYS TO HELP MOVE SOME SUPPLIES INTO THE CAFETERIA
AHFBFSDBYGDFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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BlindJacketKing In reply to TwiddleMcScrub [2017-08-30 16:04:34 +0000 UTC]
Pfffffft
My principal was calm and professional about his job.
By which I mean, he vigorously ignored us all unless someone made the city paper, and then we got called out of class and had to borrow somebody's notes.
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