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A challenging page. The children had to appear on panel one so Lotai could be seen bringing them, because she hasn't appeared for pages. Since they had to appear on panel three, to vanish, I needed something different for panel two to break monotony.
For panel four, I pushed it over the way I should have done on page 12. I think the tight close-up on Fantomah came out rather well.
For the last panel I sweated out the hand, figuring that had to look good to sell the scene
The aura around Fantomah was an afterthought, to bring more balance to the page.

First page.

Next page.

Story at ComicFury

Description
A challenging page. The children had to appear on panel one so Lotai could be seen bringing them, because she hasn't appeared for pages. Since they had to appear on panel three, to vanish, I needed something different for panel two to break monotony.
For panel four, I pushed it over the way I should have done on page 12. I think the tight close-up on Fantomah came out rather well.
For the last panel I sweated out the hand, figuring that had to look good to sell the scene
The aura around Fantomah was an afterthought, to bring more balance to the page.

First page.

Next page.

Story at ComicFury