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Published: 2014-08-26 19:42:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 257; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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Free! First to comment will be her new owner! 
You CAN:
Return, but only if you haven't drawn her.
Design the back of the outfit.
Give her a name and personality
You CANNOT:
Resell, but gift or trade is fine
You MUST: Credit me the first time you draw her
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Comments: 6

dathie [2014-09-06 15:49:56 +0000 UTC]

heya, ive gathered some notes and i have some critique 

ok so this is a cute chibi~ but because of it being that (because its harder to critque), im gonna go strait into nit picking if thats ok?

so basically, you got a good starting anatomy for a chibi, but i think you need to look a tad more into it
oh yeah your lineart and shading technqiue both need development, since they working hand in hand, you need a stronger lineart to be able to improve your shading technique

i have some tuts that you can try here 
fav.me/d7bwwzr
fav.me/d7pd22k (xipeu's tut)
fav.me/d7mdljy (nataliadsw's tut)

also users with good chibis are rainue Xipeu Hinausa  
so try these first, and if your still struggling then let me know
im sorry if i couldnt be more help, its because chibis come in different styles and its difficult to critique them

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Book-Box In reply to dathie [2014-09-06 16:08:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!

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dathie In reply to Book-Box [2014-09-06 16:09:53 +0000 UTC]

your welcome~ as i said, if you need more help speak to me, and ill do my best, but im not a professional chibi maker, but im sure if you see someone like Xipeu or other chibi artists
they're really nice, and im sure will be happy to tell you some tips to improve~

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KaitoTheFox [2014-08-26 19:55:50 +0000 UTC]

May I adopt her?

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Book-Box In reply to KaitoTheFox [2014-08-26 20:00:09 +0000 UTC]

Sure!

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KaitoTheFox In reply to Book-Box [2014-08-26 20:05:41 +0000 UTC]

Yay thank you c:

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