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Published: 2006-05-18 21:22:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 248; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Your radiance gives me sunburn, [5, 2]The bright light from within [6]
Makes so clear your wond'ress-ness [3, 4]
Shines out through your grin. [5]
I knew that light was in there, [5, 2]
Before it did shine free. [6]
Now it does, it burns my skin, [3, 4]
When you're near to me. [5]
The best of all your features - [5, 2]
Your personality - [6]
Always sits inside my mind [3, 4]
When you're not with me. [5]
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Hehe, thanx
The numbers are the syllable count in each line or part of line (where there are 2 numbers, there's a slight break between the two groups when I read it). They were mainly for me checking that it fits the rhythm, but I thought I might leave them there cos my rhythms I think can be hard to follow sometimes.
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