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The exquisite delight of lightFrom every shadow I've seen
The day seems a tad brighter with your breath
The sight of seeing you just lightens my heart
I'm stunned by your smile
I see the mountains move
Every impossible thing becomes possible with you
Yet I know you're far
For not even light can reach you
The key to my own heart is lost
For I don't know what to do
The only thing I see is the wall of silence in between
The words of unlocking our story
I know you're mine
Even through the touch of nothing
For you're my key to life
And I'll never be free
For freedom is forbidden
As long as you're not with me
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A request of a poem this is excellent every word explain me and i could feel the emotions on almost each sentence. My favorite here is I know your mine even though the touch of nothing. niceΒ
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Awww thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And yes that's one of my favorite lines. Thank you for the feedback
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I come from Melbourne. In the south-eastern state.Β
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Sweet! I have friends who grew up in Brisbane and a few in Sydney.Β
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How nice. I have relatives from dad's side who live in the west direction of London.
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I wanna go to London...been my dream since I was a little galΒ
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<3 I'm sure you'll make that dream possible. You just gotta keep focused.
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I know. I'm saving up and hoping for a flight in the next to years or to Australia. I've always wanted to visit.Β
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Thank you! Actually I have a collection. It's called the Forbidden Collection. Just look it up in my gallery if you like. I just finished part 4. It's going to be 10 parts. Appreciate the feedback!
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welcome! I just finished reading part 4Β
It's amazing!Β
Your really great writer!Β
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Appreciate the feedback! I'm glad you like it. Keep your eye out for the rest of the parts to come. Six more to go. I usually update them every other day.
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Very cool! Can't wait
Just added you as a watch
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Thank you!
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Thank you
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That sounds awesome! Can't wait to read the rest ^^
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You already saw part 2 so part 3 should be up soon
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I like it. Very nice. I know a good poetry group i could submit it to if you don't mind. They're always looking for new artists. I'm sure you'd be a welcome addition.
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Yeah that would be great! Can you let me know who? And thanks for the compliment. I appreciate it very much!
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Of course, im going to submit it to :iconposetsanctum-guild:. It's founder is , my girlfriend. It usually takes her a while to get it approved, but I see no reason why she wouldn't.
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Thank you so much! I joined the group too! Thanks for the sightingΒ
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