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Two points meet

Simple and it’s clear

They’ll collide and meet

Do they merge?

 

Come together?

For they can drift

One can move away

Then one is left lost

 

It’s dangerous and hazy

Seems there’s no way to rise

The little one will connect

It will connect to what it needs

 

Not the first point it saw

Not the first chance it sees

It goes for a match

It meets its point

 

For the little speck will grow

Not with what it thought

For something better it needed

The one thing it never saw

 

Beyond the dot’s shadow

It saw what’s there

The piece making it whole

Not yours

 

No- it’s what will make it form

Connecting the dots into what it should be

A picture beyond compare

A heart meant to be whole 



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Comments: 19

Kenzie710 [2014-11-18 05:53:20 +0000 UTC]

vey well written

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BritishWriter In reply to Kenzie710 [2014-11-25 16:33:01 +0000 UTC]

You sure? XD;

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Kenzie710 In reply to BritishWriter [2014-11-27 00:12:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes! Love it

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BritishWriter In reply to Kenzie710 [2014-11-28 22:20:22 +0000 UTC]

XDD ok good. I wasn't sure. 

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Kenzie710 In reply to BritishWriter [2014-11-29 05:18:36 +0000 UTC]

yeah its great

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BritishWriter In reply to Kenzie710 [2014-12-02 03:28:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Kenzie710 In reply to BritishWriter [2014-12-02 17:17:54 +0000 UTC]

welcome my pleasure

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BritishWriter In reply to Kenzie710 [2014-12-08 01:22:19 +0000 UTC]

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Kenzie710 In reply to BritishWriter [2014-12-08 04:28:47 +0000 UTC]

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BritishWriter In reply to Kenzie710 [2015-01-02 05:42:10 +0000 UTC]

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Kenzie710 In reply to BritishWriter [2015-01-02 22:16:27 +0000 UTC]

aww

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BritishWriter In reply to Kenzie710 [2015-01-05 02:54:49 +0000 UTC]

miss you!!

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Kenzie710 In reply to BritishWriter [2015-01-06 21:16:49 +0000 UTC]

aww miss you too! 

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careyanne75 [2014-11-18 04:18:12 +0000 UTC]

Lovely!
Such is life, stepping stones we need, and stepping stones we are. Great work!

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BritishWriter In reply to careyanne75 [2014-11-25 16:34:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I didn't want an expected happy ending. I wanted one where it takes a journey to complete something that only starts a new task

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careyanne75 In reply to BritishWriter [2014-11-28 02:27:51 +0000 UTC]

Very wise!

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BritishWriter In reply to careyanne75 [2014-11-28 22:17:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I'm not that wise though lol 

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careyanne75 In reply to BritishWriter [2014-11-29 01:29:55 +0000 UTC]

Says every wise man I know!!!

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BritishWriter In reply to careyanne75 [2014-12-02 03:31:00 +0000 UTC]

XDDD thank you. I appreciate that. You make me blush

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