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Published: 2014-10-24 04:05:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 365; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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What matches here?
Here! No! Where!
I scream with tears
Please hear me!

Where to go?
I have this blocked
There's no sight
Nothing to guide me

Punishment for life
Dreading this state
I can't break free
I can't be heard

I run to the left
Jump to the right
There's nothing but a relapse
Nothing to push through

The air is leaving
Daylight is gone
I can't wish upon my star
It's beyond my reach

It's become too much
I freeze in place
Sitting down on the lump
There's nothing to look at it

I can't see it anymore...
My mind is what's left
I'll make this all go away
It's gone...it's gone... don't come back

Let's go and play
Let's go little buddy
We must go away

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Comments: 30

Kenzie710 [2014-11-06 03:48:00 +0000 UTC]

nice

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BritishWriter In reply to Kenzie710 [2014-11-10 03:18:44 +0000 UTC]

Mental much

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Kenzie710 In reply to BritishWriter [2014-11-10 04:29:29 +0000 UTC]

what do you mean?

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BritishWriter In reply to Kenzie710 [2014-11-13 03:26:14 +0000 UTC]

The twisted story to hectic

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Kenzie710 In reply to BritishWriter [2014-11-13 04:40:57 +0000 UTC]

Ok got it

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BritishWriter In reply to Kenzie710 [2014-11-18 03:34:18 +0000 UTC]

Yeah

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XKhaz-VargX [2014-10-29 23:49:51 +0000 UTC]

You're poems always express so much emotion. Good job.

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BritishWriter In reply to XKhaz-VargX [2014-10-30 23:45:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! I've missed you!! Been trying to message you on Words with Friends. And you've always been my awesome and first reader. You know if you ever want anything I would be more than happy to do anything.Β 

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XKhaz-VargX In reply to BritishWriter [2014-10-31 01:08:51 +0000 UTC]

You too!! I've missed you too! How is it going for you?
And I just realized this, and I can't believe I haven't asked you since you're such a good writer, but what books do you like?

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BritishWriter In reply to XKhaz-VargX [2014-10-31 02:58:18 +0000 UTC]

It's been alright...read my journal. You'll get more information. Got some bad news...Β 

And thank you. I'm glad I'm getting better. And books...well I have a personal favourite collection. The Tyrlle Trilogy by Amanda Hocking, The Program/The Treatment by Suzanne Young, and Percy Jackson/Blood of Olympus by Rick Riordan.Β 

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XKhaz-VargX In reply to BritishWriter [2014-11-02 16:59:27 +0000 UTC]

I read your journallllllllllll. I'm so sorry. I just started to tear up just because of what your going through. I'm here for you if you need somebody. And I'm sorry to here that you're sick and about your back too, that sounds really bad. I hope it wasn't too serious of an accident. Yeah, just take it easy right now, better to be safe than sorry. I hope things start looking up thought ((( times a thousand

And those books sound interesting, I'll keep them in mind(and percy jackson has always seemed interesting so).

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BritishWriter In reply to XKhaz-VargX [2014-11-05 04:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I mean I have a collection of private books and those are the bulk. Especially the Trylle Series. It's a very important and meaningful story.Β 

And yeah...hasn't been easy but I've learned to deal it with it and still learning. Let's just say I haven't been this frustrated in a while

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XKhaz-VargX In reply to BritishWriter [2014-11-16 03:00:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I couldn't imagine even breaking like a leg and having it all in a cast. Ugh. I'd just wanna move it.

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BritishWriter In reply to XKhaz-VargX [2014-11-18 03:30:46 +0000 UTC]

Exactly and it's no funΒ 

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theshrillcriesoflife [2014-10-26 06:28:57 +0000 UTC]

This is so relatable it made me feel extremely uncomfortable.

Which is a good thing.

The word 'hectic' is perfectly embodied by this work.

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BritishWriter In reply to theshrillcriesoflife [2014-10-27 23:40:04 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.Β 

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theshrillcriesoflife In reply to BritishWriter [2014-10-28 03:54:51 +0000 UTC]

No worries!

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BritishWriter In reply to theshrillcriesoflife [2014-10-30 23:47:57 +0000 UTC]

awesome basketball will be up tomorrow

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theshrillcriesoflife In reply to BritishWriter [2014-10-31 10:54:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I'm looking forward to it!

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BritishWriter In reply to theshrillcriesoflife [2014-10-31 23:14:30 +0000 UTC]

I hope you do like itΒ 

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Loca15 [2014-10-24 11:55:22 +0000 UTC]

This is so awesome ^^

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BritishWriter In reply to Loca15 [2014-10-24 13:39:59 +0000 UTC]

What a twisted ending huh?

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Loca15 In reply to BritishWriter [2014-10-24 17:06:01 +0000 UTC]

I know! x)

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BritishWriter In reply to Loca15 [2014-10-26 04:02:25 +0000 UTC]

XDDD evil enough?

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Loca15 In reply to BritishWriter [2014-10-26 14:11:34 +0000 UTC]

Very XD

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BritishWriter In reply to Loca15 [2014-10-27 23:43:05 +0000 UTC]

It's only getting worse >:3

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Loca15 In reply to BritishWriter [2014-10-28 01:10:57 +0000 UTC]

Nuuu porqua???!! XDDD

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BritishWriter In reply to Loca15 [2014-10-28 01:46:58 +0000 UTC]

Porque si XD

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Loca15 In reply to BritishWriter [2014-10-28 11:15:44 +0000 UTC]

Aww haha XD

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BritishWriter In reply to Loca15 [2014-10-30 23:46:47 +0000 UTC]

XDDDΒ 

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