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bubblemoth — July 18th, 1997
Published: 2014-03-27 17:39:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 135; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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let me be
with the taste of mud under my gums
and leaves crushed under my knees.
rivers running faster than i could
washed up pebbles and foliage
caught between my fingers.
the shafts of sun are blinding me
through the treetops, and somewhere
a bird is singing too loud-
i close my eyes, and exhale
memories of the worst times now passed
and inhale new air, new skin,
new me
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Comments: 2
Lovely poetry, it signifies the strong emotional pains which are now subdued from the character. The poem does flow, but i'm a good fan of rhyming words. Overall this is a really nice attempt at free verse.
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thank you very much! and i too, am a fan of rhyme, im just not very good at it.
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