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Published: 2001-09-21 21:05:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 253; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 32
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Description The pitter-patter of small feet,

The running of fearful feet.

Laughter fills the room,

Screams tear through the building.

Moooommmmy, Daaadddy, I'm hiding,

Mom, Dad, I need you.

Peek-a-boo, come find me,

Under the rubble I am hidden.

Hug, I love you,

Goodbye. I love you, forever.
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Comments: 4

noviwan [2001-09-28 20:35:23 +0000 UTC]

Gads, Chrystyne, you sure know how to throw off MY day! I'm going to need a few minutes to compose myself. An excellent dichotomy. An excellent poem.

Novi Wan

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jsenn [2001-09-23 08:05:24 +0000 UTC]

Excellent! I rejoice in the stand that poets have taken at this site. It is a mirror of the heart of our country and it will bring us through this awful time of grief.
(Β―`Β·.,ΒΈΒΈ,.Β·Β΄
j♥y

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-mandingo- [2001-09-22 02:06:18 +0000 UTC]

goodlord that gave me the goosebumps.. outstanding imagery...the simplicity is beautiful...one of the best poems ive seen on devart...keep up the excellent writing!

::I see you listening..but can you really hear me?::

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faithwalker [2001-09-21 21:22:02 +0000 UTC]

** Standing, tearful applause **

Faithwalker

Grow

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