HOME | DD
Caffeinated-Creator β Sketching out a Pose
Published: 2010-06-03 19:20:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 330; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 22
Redirect to original
Description
THIS is for my comic; I was having a hard time visualizing someone bent over from this sort of perspective and so I drew this out; the rest of the details would've followed if it wasn't for two reasons; 1) she's too blocky and un-balanced, I rejected this since it was simply too wonky and would've been a pain to tweak -and- 2) its too extreme, she's bent down too far and I exaggerated some parts of her; also her face bugs me for some untold reason.So there you go, consider this a sneak-peek; but you'll prolly still not have any idea of what the finished product looks like ^^
Related content
Comments: 31
Oh, nice job with the perspective 
π: 0 β©: 1
π: 0 β©: 1
Nah, I think the only problem is the hand o.o
π: 0 β©: 1
well.. you wouldn't know the actual comic page :3 I could show it to you if you promise not to distribute it in any way ^^
π: 0 β©: 1
Oh, sure... me swears me won't show anyone D: and if I do then Ryeji-kun has the right to do a yaoi drawing of the OC that is me and you know how much I hate yaoi (if not then you know now xD) ^^
π: 0 β©: 1
sending nao :3
π: 0 β©: 1
D: ... dam... I knew I forgot something xDU I did see the other pics but was gonna comment laters then me forgot cuz got busy at the office... *facepalm* Sorry, Ryeji-kun ;A;
π: 0 β©: 1
XD OH well now I made the same mistake, forgetting to check all my messages before I replied, but don't sweat it, its fine and I am busy too so I know how easy it is to slip up.
π: 0 β©: 1
Ok then... it's just that me dun like doing simple comments when I comment xD me like to see it calmly then analize and say what I think o.O So I'm gonna do it laters xD Oh, do you take some constructive critic? O.o It's just that I dunno how far you are in your comic thing and I'm afraid you won't like me finding something bad on it if you already did a lot... ._.
π: 0 β©: 1
I like criticism as long as it doesn't attack my artistic liberties, you don't have to hold back ^^ and I have others also looking at the pages as I go on ^^
:iconaltarithe: <-- my girlfriend is the first to see them :3
π: 0 β©: 1
Oh, no... it has to do with the drawing style... not the topic of the series xD I already answered the e-mail :3 uh? I guess you mispelled her name since the icon didn't work xDU
π: 0 β©: 1
don't usually do that.. err trying again XD <-- there and I did see your reply :3
π: 0 β©: 0
wow, at this one the posture and expression are simply awesome 0//u//0
π: 0 β©: 1
awww thanks ^^
π: 0 β©: 0
Well...you touched on the bits I was about to comment on. XP
But otherwise...you know, that pose really IS difficult. O.o You did a good job, baby. ^^
What's wrong with her face? O.o
π: 0 β©: 1
kinda, its hard to get the angle of the torso right and I screwed up bigtime on her hand ^^ the finished version looks a lot better don't it?
I dunno, somehow the articulation makes her look old.
π: 0 β©: 1
Oh wow, I didn't even notice the hand. X____X Gods, mental note, don't look at deviations in the morning.
What is she doing with her hand, holding her hair? O.o
hm....I think it's just the angle and lack of slight daintiness.
π: 0 β©: 1
heh heh :3 yeah I know; baaaaaad Moony :3
She's actually twirling her locks, its a confidence thing that was explained before in the scripts, but was left out so I dunno how to bring that up again :/ basically she's had the problem of looking like other people all her life and hates getting mistaken for someone else so she cherishes the things she can do to stand out.
Hmm, maybe then ^^ but I like how it came out when I coloured it and in the future I should learn from this when I draw other, aged characters *ish bad at drawing people 30+ nya*
π: 0 β©: 0
snygg fΓ₯ngning pΓ₯ posen ^^ men Γ€r inte hΓΆger handen som hon hΓ₯ller hΓ₯ret med lite fel?? O.o ser ut sen en vΓ€nter hand O.o men annars var det snyggt jobbat^^
π: 0 β©: 1
jag vet; det lyckades jag ocksΓ₯ Γ€ndra med den slutgiltiga posen :3
Tack ^^ men alla smΓ₯ fel gΓΆr att jag ogillar den, trevligt att du tycker det blev bra
π: 0 β©: 0
thanks ^^ its a bit exaggerated tho isn't it? like she'd be on skis or something
π: 0 β©: 1
wow dude just wow
im amazed at how you captured the pose just right.
π: 0 β©: 1
awww ^^ well.. like I said in the comments, loads of errors and its a bit extreme tho :3
π: 0 β©: 1
pfft its awesome! X3
π: 0 β©: 1
if you say so :3
π: 0 β©: 1
cause it is XP
π: 0 β©: 0
Dude that pose is hard to draw...
I was trying it out the other night actually and just like ended up totally pissed
Anyhow, pretty good dude!~
π: 0 β©: 1
yeah it is, you gotta take the parts into consideration that don't bend, then the ones that do and everything in between :/ bleh, but thanks, I kinda liked how it went too, except it was too extreme and the picture got beyond saving so I used it as a reference instead.
π: 0 β©: 1