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cake-error — heavy rain
Published: 2011-08-22 20:56:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 120; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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heavy rain is beautiful
as it streams down my window
wave of blurriness upon patch of clarity
striking me with fierce intensity
the low grey clouds
so close
so clean
swaddling me in its woolen gaze
pull me close to the sky
each droplet pelts me
with all the strength I wish I had,
and I stand, arms outstretched
to catch the glorious pure rain.
thunder echoes on
lightning flickering across my wet skin
I gaze on in wonderment
and watch the heavy rain
pass.

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Methemac [2011-09-08 23:26:50 +0000 UTC]

gorgeous imagery

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cake-error In reply to Methemac [2011-09-09 00:48:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you~
It was actually written during a storm, and I've always wanted to go out and stand in one...of course, no one will let me so I wrote this instead.

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