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Published: 2007-05-17 17:31:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 299; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 2
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Description The chocolate won't taste as sweet
The flowers won't smell as fragrant
The sun won't look as pretty
As it dies over the horizon.

The hugs won't feel as real
The smiles won't be as grand
The music won't sound the same
Without you there to sing along.

And we'll remember forever the hugs that you gave
And the smiles that you offered
And the music that was your passion.

And I'll always remember the smell of the flowers
As they were laid carefully on your grave.

But you still offer us your hugs
And you still give away your smiles
And you still play your music
For any one willing to listen.

That is because you've never stopped.

And I still feel your hugs
And I still see your smile
And I still hear your music
In every life that you touched.

And, Haley, believe it or not,

Those lives were a lot.
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Comments: 9

Jadeybaby65 [2007-05-21 14:04:11 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's so... Well, how do I describe it? I love it! You read the beginning and it just makes you want to read more.

It's sad, but lovely
Good job!

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CapnShortstack In reply to Jadeybaby65 [2007-05-21 15:08:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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FromtheSoul4 [2007-05-18 16:09:52 +0000 UTC]

Eryn it is so beautiful! I miss her too... :Anguish:

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manda-phantom [2007-05-18 11:09:48 +0000 UTC]

Aww I love it!

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CapnShortstack In reply to manda-phantom [2007-05-18 11:13:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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MyTraptSoul [2007-05-18 00:16:05 +0000 UTC]

Very touching, wonderfully written

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CapnShortstack In reply to MyTraptSoul [2007-05-18 11:14:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. It means a lot to me.

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MyTraptSoul In reply to CapnShortstack [2007-05-18 20:37:48 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome!

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E-N-D-XD [2007-05-17 17:36:09 +0000 UTC]

That's really sweat,T_T!

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