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Published: 2012-11-07 15:15:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 66; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Two fingers against my temple (Just smile, it’ll be alright)Alone I pull the trigger (Is it wrong to feel alive?)
And alone I start to cry. (These tears, they purify)
In the darkness of the room (In the shadows of my mind)
I pray to god for strength (Somebody save me from myself)
Because I’m barely holding on. (I’m sick of holding on)
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Comments: 5
Dragonia27 [2012-11-07 16:56:25 +0000 UTC]
I love the duality that you wrote into this. It's short, simple and direct but very well written and the emotions are conveyed clearly. Very well done. Thank you for sharing this.
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Catsitta In reply to Dragonia27 [2012-11-07 20:07:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I tried making it longer, but realized that I couldn't. Short and simple was how it was destined to be.
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Dragonia27 In reply to Catsitta [2012-11-08 07:23:14 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. I'm glad it's not any longer, to be honest. It's perfect the way it is.
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