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Published: 2009-03-17 13:14:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 301; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 10
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just for practise.size: 1440x900
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the text is pixelated like mad crazy, and the butterfly looks like he was just slapped on there. same with the mushrooms and the tree should match the lighting of the rest you have a high contrast theme going your tree should reflect that.
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your criticism is a bit exaggerated in some points i think.
its right that the text is pixelated in some areas but its not so bad that it would disturb the overall impression of the deviation. i neither share your opinion with the butterfly and the mushrooms.
to the tree: yes its right that it is to bright. it was really hard to fit it in because the stock is even much brighter.
in some parts its due to the clouds over the tree but you are right, its not really fitting now.
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theres no excuses for the tree, a designer can always fix something, my criticism is never exaggerated, I say what I mean because I design for a living, im very serious about giving my criticism and your butterfly has a outerglow either from poor cutting/blurring or there's simply a outerglow around it which gives the impression that it doesn't fit "naturally" and same with the mushrooms to a lesser extent. And like I said before there is no excuse to why you cannot fix something, there's always a way. Please don't be offended by criticism, it's just that. Everyone benefits from hearing this, not just you.
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i appreciate every criticism but i should be allowed to answer
as you could have read i agree with you in some points but also have a different opinion about the things i mentioned.
due to the fact that this is just practice its not such a big crime that the tree doesn't fit in so well
so, i think you've been a bit offended by my comment although it was just my opinion...not an excuse or something
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sorry for triple post but the schools computer doesn't always work properly, as you can see.
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you are very welcome to your opinion, i was not offended, I was just simply stating that you shouldn't make excuses like "it's just practice" etc. etc. I like your work and I am watching you, so I figured it would be kind criticism from one artist to the next.
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you are very welcome to your opinion, i was not offended, I was just simply stating that you shouldn't make excuses like "it's just practice" etc. etc. I like your work and I am watching you, so I figured it would be kind criticism from one artist to the next.
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