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Published: 2004-11-06 20:08:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 91; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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The bight sun in the skyDraws me to the other side.
But when she sets in all her fame
The night sky is my domain.
Stars shine bright all around
Close enough to see, too far to be found.
The stars are for me, though far away
Never glowing for the sun during the day.
I illuminate the darkness, if only just a little
Like a human heart, I burn from the middle.
Without me, the black sky would never shine
But now the sun is coming and I am drawn to the other side.
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Comments: 9
the-beastie [2005-01-26 17:57:43 +0000 UTC]
This is very well-written, you must have a been a smart eleven-year-old I like it
Sorry I'm all commented-out on other things, can't be arsed to go over it in detail...but the flow is good and it's nicely written although a little forced in places. Good job
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Jin-Xuinasha [2004-11-08 03:26:46 +0000 UTC]
not bad for when your so young,when i was eleven i still could not get wither i shoudl wear boxer or breifs
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celestial-divinity In reply to Jin-Xuinasha [2004-11-08 05:00:09 +0000 UTC]
LOL, it's all about the boxer-briefs. LOLOL, j/k. But thank you!
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Jin-Xuinasha In reply to celestial-divinity [2004-11-08 21:13:37 +0000 UTC]
lol,sorry i had to comment
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celestial-divinity In reply to ShAdEdFuRy7 [2004-11-08 04:57:42 +0000 UTC]
Ah, thanks! :ets young self:: Good work, lassie.
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