CelestialInk In reply to Isi-Daddy [2017-02-23 18:08:43 +0000 UTC]

Yes. Al and his kittens. And the best part is that he ropes Mei into the kitten thing as well.   I picture those two running a animal rescue centre from Ling's palace . . . 

I hope you enjoyed the way I brought him in.  

I only realised that after I wrote the chapter, so I had to go back and fix it. But, I don't think there was ever a chance that Ling wouldn't recognise Greed. 

Yes. This is a moment I found difficult to write. Ling is happy, but also angry, since Greed basically tricked him into letting him go. So, I wanted to have him feel overwhelmed here (I hope I did okay . . .)

Sorry. I just had to show that Greed know exactly what Ling went through after Greed died . . .

Yes. Ling bought an outfit that was identical to Greed's.  

I hope the way I write him lives up to your expectations. Btw, I wanted to say this . . . I'm putting uploading in your hands. I'll say if I can or can't, and you say how many chapters. So, I'll have time this weekend . . . how many do you want me to put up? 

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Isi-Daddy In reply to CelestialInk [2017-02-24 00:27:24 +0000 UTC]

haha yes I've read that they have an animal rescue centre and that is awesome

Yes, I loved it!

haha so you forgot it the first time I wouldn't have thought of it either but I also think that Ling would have recognized him even if he was a mouse or something else.

You did more than ok! Don't worry about it, Ling's feelings came across pretty well!

Don't be sorry! It is a great details and you should take it as compliment if you can make your readers cry.

I laughed so much about that fact

You write situation where I never thought about with Greed so it is very interesting. I don't know how I would have imagined him that way so I like the way you do it.
In my hands? euhm you can upload up to 4 chapters if you want. Next week I make a bus ride back home and it will take me about 12h so I have lots of time So you could also upload some more chapters.

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CelestialInk In reply to Isi-Daddy [2017-02-25 15:59:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. And I can promise you'll see more of that rescue center!

Yep. I wrote it out, and then read it again and felt like something was wrong--then it hit me and I scrambled to fix everything! 

Hell yeah. Mouse Greed.  

I'll try. I still feel bad though . . . 

You'll be laughing more later, I hope!

Thanks. I'm really pleased you are enjoying my interpretation of Greed. 

Okay. I uploaded up to chapter 17 . . but I think I'll go till 21. Long bus rides are a pain . . . Hope these give you something to pass the time.  

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Isi-Daddy In reply to CelestialInk [2017-03-08 09:39:38 +0000 UTC]

yeah, I saw that rescue center it I still love Greed's reaction to it.

haha I see why but you did a great job on fixing it.

Don't feel bad

At had no bus ride that day because my guinea pig were sick (he is still not well yet) so I asked my boyfriend to drive me home. My guinea pig doesn't seem to care about long car rides.

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CelestialInk In reply to Isi-Daddy [2017-03-12 14:32:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you liked Greed's reaction to it!

Thanks Isi 

I'm so sorry to hear that your pet is ill. Has he gotten any better?

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Isi-Daddy In reply to CelestialInk [2017-03-16 07:53:12 +0000 UTC]

Not yet, he still refuses to eat hay. He is eating but not enough to gain some weight. So I have to also feed him. At least he seems to ejnoy sitting in my lap and getting feed.

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CelestialInk In reply to Isi-Daddy [2017-03-18 03:31:37 +0000 UTC]

Oh no. Still, at least he is eating something. 

I really really hope he gets better soon.

He sounds like my blind cat . . . she loves sitting on my lap and getting petted.  

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Isi-Daddy In reply to CelestialInk [2017-03-19 13:06:44 +0000 UTC]

yes, but his is loosing more and more weight :/

haha that is cute. I really love it but I'm still worried

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CelestialInk In reply to Isi-Daddy [2017-03-20 16:12:56 +0000 UTC]

Well, I really, really do hope that he gets better, Isi. 

          (Lots of hugs since words don't work here)

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