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CelestialInk — Nothing is Impossible: Chapter 9
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Published: 2017-02-18 08:21:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 331; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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In this part I thought that we could have Lan Fan and Greed begin to bond. And I wanted to have them play Pai Sho (ATLA reference intended!)Related content
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I liked how you are changing views in every chapter. I mean it's always third person but in every chapter you feel like you're following someone else.
OMG they kissed? Did I miss something? No, I haven't missed anything, dammit Greed! Don't confuse me like that!
And it seems that he is not only pissed but also a little jealous or am I imagining things? At least in that moment when he thought that Ling and Lan Fan kissed.
Pai Sho? Does Iroh told you that?
I love that you put your on ideas and backstories into your fanfiction but it's sad what happened to Lan Fan's parents and brother
I can't tell how cute that scene is imagining her with Greed swapping stories about Ling! That is adorable and you can feel their friendship growing.
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Greed! Don't confuse her!
Thanks. You're spot on there--it's called an "attached narrator" according to my creative writing lecturer. I divided the fic so that there was an equal balance in perspectives 13 Chapters for Ling, 13 Chapters for Greed and 13 Chapters for Lan Fan.
But, I left Chapter 40 for an entirely different character.
Yes, he is a little jealous . . . his feelings for Lan Fan have begun to emerge. Though he doesn't have a cooking clue.
Yes, Pai Sho. Avatar reference abound in this fic. And, I love the idea of the Xingese crew playing Pai Sho . . .
Thank you. I knew that she had to have a tragic backstory . . . otherwise, why wouldn't her siblings or parents have been with her on the way to Amestirs when Ling went there in the first place?
I'm so glad you liked it. I thought it was a great bonding for them.
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Too late. He did!
ha! I'm happy I can still spot some stylistic means. When you're talking about those things I get scared that I'm not prepared to make my own story.
I love that you also give everyone the same amount of chapters to be the narrator.
The last chapter is Mei, and all it will say was "I told you"
Joke. I'm curious who it's going to be
Yeah, here we see your love to Avatar and I love that!
Could also be possible, that their family except for Fu didn't want her to step into her grandfathers footsteps. But tragic backstories are always a "great" reason.
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Sorry about that.
No, no, no! Don't be scared. I don't mean to talk like I know what I'm doing (I have no cooking clue what I'm doing) I just wanted to share what I learnt at school. That's it.
Thanks. I thought that it would be a nice balancing act between them. I wanted to do the same in the next fic as well.
You're welcome to guess, and I'll tell you if you're right.
Yep, you're right. I didn't even think of that. I guess I just got caught up in angsty moods.
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It's ok!
You know that I'm always scared especially if I see people seems to know so much more than me. It's o that you want to share what you learnt at school and I love to know more!
That's great! I'm looking forward to your next fic!
It's Wu!
it's always the angsty mood which wins.
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If I notice anything more, or remember anything, I'm more than happy to share. But, I don't mean to make you feel bad if I do.
Well, It's in progress. Slow progress, because right now I am simultaneously writing 4 fanfics and my own story . . .
No. Not Wu. I'll tell you that the character is a canon character.
And, I don't know whether that's a good thing or not.
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It's not that I feel bad. I'm really happy to learn more but it also feels like I'm not ready for a story. Also if I hear someone is working on their story for about 9 years and still hasn't started writing it.
But one of my mottos is: Learning by doing. So if I'm done with plotting the first arc, I'll start drawing!
4 fanfics and your own story 
What a pitty! 
haha ok! Maybe Ed?
It's both.
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I think you're on the right track. As Izumi says "There's no better teacher than experience."
And, who are we to argue with Teacher?
Exactly . . . we put ourselves under too much pressure.
Hmm . . . maybe'll I'll write a bonus chapter with his thoughts? (oh dear, more writing to do.)
Nope. Not Ed. You're right about it being a male character, though.
You're right!
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Yes and she is right!
haha true
maybe some kind of diary entry
Oh it's a male character. My next suggestion is Al but now my head is telling me that it could be Fu. Since you like to add some spiritual moments in your writings.
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So, we don't argue with her!
Way too true. . . .
"Dear diary
The foreign dog was with the Emperor again. I have no idea why the Emperor enjoys the company of such a cretin. fear his presence will bring Xing to ruin . . . . "
Something like that?
You're not wrong about me giving my stuff a slightly spiritual angle (I hope that I'm not coming across as preachy, though!)
Nope. It is not Fu though. Or Al.
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yep, that's the best!
OMG! Yes, that would be a perfect entry for his diary.
Ha, so I'm on the right path. Hmmm let me think about it a little more I still have some chapters left to find the right person.
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I'm so happy you liked the diary entry. Shame, Wu won't get a break . . . Ling will always hang out with the foreign dogs.
Okay, but I'll tell you another clue, the character is alive--he survived the Promised Day.
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How couldn't I?
Ling, you are a disgrace ... at least for Wu
Ooh ok! Is it someone who already appeared in your story?
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To Wu, his majesty is behaving disgracefully, but who really cares what Wu thinks anyway?
No. He is mentioned in a chapter, but the epilogue is his first appearance.
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I do, I want to make fun of him
oooh I need to check it out .... gosh I should really continue reading!
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We can make fun of him to our heart's delight.
Don't stress. This story (and all my others) isn't going anywhere. You don't have to rush to read them (or read them at all if you don't want to).
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I still feel sorry, you've uploaded so much lately and I wasn't even able to continue reading your fic.
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Please, don't stress about it. I know that you want to read them, and that's more than enough for me.
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Yes, I want to... and I hope I can read a chapter each day next week. I really want to continue!
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That would be awesome. I would love to see what you think of the further chapters (and the other stories as well)
But, I know life is busy, so don't feel like you have to read anything (though I probably should upload a bit more of the fic sometime this coming weekend . . .)
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yes, I could finally go on reading
it's not that I feel forced I just want to read. I want to know more about your story and I also want to read your other little fics. As I said I really enjoy reading your writings it calms me.
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This is probably one of the greatest compliments that I've gotten over my writing. Thank you so so much.
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