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Published: 2016-11-23 04:03:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 470; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Okay, I meant to upload this last night, but I was finished after my exam. So, here it is, another fanfiction--as I promised Isi-Daddy .This is a story about my OT3, Greelingfan, but I wanted to do something a little different since I always find that OT3's are over sexualised, and people don't often treat the characters as being in a genuine relationship, which bothers me a bit.
I have no experience with snow, so forgive me if the descriptions of a snowstorm are strange.
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You know, I probably wouldn't have given so much mercy to Kazu. Poor Mei! and is it bad I enjoyed seeing Kazu get completely owned? because I did. XD and those scenes with all three of them. Greed, lan Fan and Ling... 
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Ling and Greed never said they would spare Kazu. It's entirely possible that they killed him when they got back. Or imprisoned him for life, for attempted murder.
I'm glad you liked the way I wrote Greed, Ling and Lan Fan. Especially Greed's sarcasm.
Mei--I love writing this sibling bond between the two (three??) of them! And, yes, the important thing here was Mei's health. Once she was safe, then they could worry about the kissing . . .
Yes, I wish he had survived. It would have been amazing to see Greeling as Emperor.
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"There was too much paperwork involved in that, Greed said."
what an argument! great! x'DD
I love that you always describe what they are wearingand sometimes you put so many details into that. A friend of mine is always amazed about my clothes I'm drawing because she doesn't really need to describe clothes (she is also a writer) and so she said she isn't very creative about those. And that's why it is particularly noticeable for me.
Aaah and I don't like Kazu and Long. They used Xao Mei as a bait! That's so mean! D:<
"She sees assassinsin every bowl of soup." haha that's so great! That's why I love greed
What I also noticed are your dynamic little fight scenes. I really love those. They seems to be so real.
"Royal-Pain-in-the-As" best nickname xDD
The breathing and concentration to find Mei (also what she did before to find Xao Mei) reminds me of how Toph is seeing and also what Aang learned in teh swamp to find the others.
"Not with a thumb, you moron, use your two fingers!"
Greed is smart! I love that you put that little mistake, almost everyone does, into your story.
And it's really cute that not only Ling but also Greed have fallen in Love with Lan Fan. Sadly they had no chance to kiss but it was still so cute how they warmed Mei. ♥
Again its so well written! I usually a little shocked reading 14 pages on a screen but it was so great I couldn't stop!
I also love how you caotured a typical Political problem. Changing something for the good doesn't only have proponents. People will stand up against it if they aren't pleased or if they would get in a worse situation because of that. Great work on that!
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What an amazing response. I can't believe you liked it so much! And thank you so so so much for your compliments!
I'm glad you liked the reasoning behind Greed giving up being Ruler of The World. It was, I think, the only downside he could really find.
Thanks for noticing the descriptions of the clothes! I try to give descriptions of the clothes and scenery so that people can really picture what's going on. It's a bit tricky, because I don't want to be describing EVERY blade of grass to the reader, but at the same time, I don't want the reader to be lost.
I also don't like them. That's why I had Greed and Ling give Kazu a beat down. Overprotective Greed and Ling are my headcanon. As for my fight scenes, I think they come from the fact that I do martial arts, and my Sensei takes alot of time explaining what move to do, and Why we do certain moves. He shows us carefully how the moves would be applied in a combat situation, even though the dojo is strictly against sparring.
I got the inspiration from Avatar, and from the mediations we do in Tai Chi. I figure that, though the Xingese instinctively sense the flow of qi, they would need to really concentrate when identifying a particular person.
With Greeed's knowledge about survival and medical things--I think he learnt them in order to help all his Chimera. If they went to a normal hospital, they could be hurt, so there was no way Greed would allow them to endanger themselves. So he took on the responsibility of looking after them.
I'm glad you liked the way they warmed Mei. And the way that they both love Lan Fan. I was trying not to get to something too sexual, but convey a genuine love, so I'm glad that came across!
As for the political stituation--I figure Ling is going to have an uphill battle against the traditionalists when he becomes Emperor, so I wanted to indicate that.
Also, I've never seen snow or a snow storm . . . I'm glad the description was okay.
I honestly can't believe you liked this so much. I was so worried about uploading this . . .
Thank you so much for the kind words and awesome comment.
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You're very welcome!
That Greed gives up being Ruler of The World necessary and he knows that for sure.
I think you have found a perfect way to describe clothes and scenery not too much and not too little.
Right, I forgot about your martial art skills for a moment. That's of course very advantageous for you. I'm doing nothing like that but I hope I can show it as genuine as possible.
Yes and I thing that's perfect that he knows how to treat his Chimeras. That's why I love that point of your story! And also that you show Greed as more intelligent than other people do.
I also think he will have a lot of troubles with the traditionalists but it seems he is dealing quite well with them yet.
Oh yes, I wanted to say something about the snow storm. I don't know how cold it can be in Xing but if Mei didn't wear enough and the storm is that heavy, it's very possible that she loses consciousness.
I really love snow and I love to go to concerts. What does this have in common you're asking? One time there was a concert in December. It was snowing and cold. Very cold. About -17°C. I've waited in the cold till I could finally enter the concert hall. I was never more cold than that day. (My hair was frozen 
Do not worry! It was really great! Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you so much, Isi!
Yep, the martial arts does help. I think that you'll do well at it, but if you feel stuck, I can always read it over and give you suggestions or pointers if you feel you need them
I always found Greed to be intelligent--not genius level, but certainly not stupid. I don't know why people would find him dim--he did figure out how to capture Al, and that souls could be transmuted, after all
Oh my gosh! How the hell did you survive being that cold?:0 I'm shivering just thinking about it! I hope the concert was worth it!
I'm happy that the snow storm was okay--I did do some research to make sure that some of the details were accurate, but you never know . . .
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again you're very welcome!
That youl be great if you could do so. But it's not only that I'm afraid of how it happend also of how I'm going to show it in pictures. There needs to be a lot of dynamic and I'm not that used to draw stuff like that.
True, I also think that he is smart.
But it's funny why heeven want to bind his soul which he doesn't have because he is a homunculus? He can't bind a soul he has many living within him.
Thick clothes help a lot. Fun fact: That concert is every year before christmas and it's calles "Eisheilige Nacht" which means "holy night of ice" 
I think the cold doesn't effect me that easily because I was very ill as new born baby. I had high fever - over 40°C so my mother went to the ambulance and I had to take an ice bath.
I would say the snowstorm was well done. I also haven't any experience with snowstorms jsut with cold weather and much snow.
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I would be honoured. And, I think if you practice at the dynamic movements, you will definitely get them to come across. It just takes some attempts (you already have the talent, so I'm not fussed about that aspect.)
I always thought that he didn't want to bind himself to the armour. I thought that he wanted to do it for the Devil's Nest Gang, so they could all live forever together. At least, that's what made sense for me, since he is technically immortal, as long as he avoids getting hurt.
Wow, that's actually a beautiful name for a concert. I've never really been to a live concert before--in SA all the big concert halls are far away from where I live.
Shame man. That sounds intense--I'm glad you are okay. That's another thing we have in common. I was also extremely sick as a newborn.
That's more experience than I have.
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I see I have to make a special thanks page if I'm ever done with my comic to thank all my supporters
thanks! At the moment I already try to get more dynamic into my pictures, so that they don't just stand around
I don't have the mange here but I thought he said there that he want to bind hsi soul because he wants to be immortal and binding a sould to a lifeless object is kind of being immortal.
But that headcanon that he would do it for his gang is so cute! I would love that
Yes, it's right he is technically immortal but he is Greed he wants mor than jsut be technically immortal, but he doesn't know that binding a soul doesn't make you more immortal than having/being a philosopher's stone.
aah that's sad. I've been to some concerts and I have some tickets for next year. 
haha so many things we have in common.
hehe true
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You don't have to do that.
He did say that about binding himself to the armour "I want eternal life" were his words, but it never made sense to me, since in the next few panels he says he's over 200 years old. But, you're right about him being Greedy . . . .
Still, I kind of lean more towards the idea that he wants to find out how to bind souls for the Devil's Nest Gang.
I'd love to go to concerts. Who's this band that you're going to go see? It sounds really exciting!
It's funny how much we do have in common.
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I know but I want to
It also didn't make sense for me but Greed himself didn't make anysense at all. Wanting everything, saying that he doesn't really care about his gang but freaking out because Bradley killed them.
I don't think that's what Arakawa meant in those panels but I still love your idea!
Those are all German bands. Subway to Sally is the first one. I see them every year <3 Schandmaul the next at the beginning of 2017. I haven't seen them for the last 5 years 
hehe true
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Aww, I'm flattered.
Greed has that front where he acts like he doesn't care about anyone, but really he does.
I'm glad you like that idea.
I'm so happy that you're getting to see such awesome bands. I really hope that they live up to your expectations, especially the one who haven't gone to before.
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yes that's true! I can't understand why people think that Greed only thinks about himself. He cares a lot about his comrades! That reminds me of the final battle were he worries so much about the women and the people injured.
I think they will do great. I've seen them on a DVD and thei rconcert wsa great so I can't wait to see them myself.
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Fingers crossed they don't disappoint.
I also don't get why people would think that about Greed. In the battle with Pride, he's the one telling everone to watch out, and defending his Chimeras, and as you pointed out, he was worried about all the injured people in the final battle. He even was worried about that random Briggs soldier!
Greed is a softy!
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haha yes he truely is a softy
Noone else did care about anybody only Greed did. But he is the one who only cares about him self.
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"Care about only himself" That's what he CLAIMS (we all know that's just him putting on a show).
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of course he is only puttin on a show. It's Greed!
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He's got such a flare for the theatrical.
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I mean, his speech to Alphonse about what he wants looks like something out of a play. Nevermind his dramatic entrance when he takes on Wrath on the Promised Day.
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haha that's true. But the first time he said that was more authentic than the second time. When he repeat it in the body of Ling it always sounds a little wary.
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It did sound a little strange when in Ling's body--but that may be the weird and terrible situation he was in at that moment . . . Bido!
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That is true... it was because of Bido and then Bido finished his sentence. It was so heartbreaking
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I know! Each time I watch that part I end up screaming at Greed not to do it--I know he can't hear me, but I can't help it.
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