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Published: 2007-01-18 09:07:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 179; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description A heart so
Black
that
no light can enter.
And
no light
may leave.

A mind so
Black
that
it can generate
no light
with which to
battle the world.

A soul so
Black
that
it absorbs all light
and tries to
keep some.
Yet fails.

With nothing inside
and with
nothing
to become
my life is
only
Black.
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Comments: 12

richardxthripp [2007-02-02 21:09:56 +0000 UTC]

How depressing... in a good way.

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celestiality In reply to richardxthripp [2007-02-03 08:28:33 +0000 UTC]

yeah, thats actually how i think of it too - thanks

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richardxthripp In reply to celestiality [2007-02-03 16:47:55 +0000 UTC]

Wow, cool! You're welcome.

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antilect [2007-01-24 00:14:30 +0000 UTC]

I feel like you were the best person in the world who could ever have read my poem! Much love to you!! I'm from sweden, so your gramatic corrections of my piece is understandable. It's hard to know someone else's language like you know your own

Besides, these are actually song lyrics!

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celestiality In reply to antilect [2007-01-24 00:49:31 +0000 UTC]

hey, thank you and i definitely understand. but dont worry, people around here will always try and help you out.

and are these from a song? or do they sound like a song?

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athousandmiles [2007-01-18 13:30:47 +0000 UTC]

nice poem...so dark... I hope that you aren't feeling bad...

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celestiality In reply to athousandmiles [2007-01-19 12:14:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you - and i'm not sure if i am. when i do, its not for long anyway

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athousandmiles In reply to celestiality [2007-01-19 13:35:13 +0000 UTC]

sometimes everyone have bad days...

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loveandpeacetotoro [2007-01-18 12:42:28 +0000 UTC]

Very cool! I like this poem Sopheh!!

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celestiality In reply to loveandpeacetotoro [2007-01-19 12:09:17 +0000 UTC]

im glad - and thank you

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evil-empress [2007-01-18 09:15:41 +0000 UTC]

This poem is very dark but it is good! I hope you're not feeling like this now!

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celestiality In reply to evil-empress [2007-01-18 09:19:28 +0000 UTC]

well... not right at this moment, anyway!
and thankye

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