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Published: 2006-10-25 12:37:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 176; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Fall.


To descend, and gather speed. They watch, as gravity
reclaims me.

My life is trapped in a dance of chaos;
     please give me back
     my control.

Under the stares of flattened eyes – searing my soul

I fall.


To await the end, and yearn for help. They watch, as shadow
reclaims me.

My thoughts are stolen, plucked from my mind;
     as their voices lessen
     my control.

Under the waves of desperate pleas – drowning my soul

I fall.


To give up, and fall within. They watch as my heart
reclaims me.

My hopes are dying, suffocated by night;
     and I relinquish
     my control.

Under the pain of untrusting – scarring my soul

I fall.
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Comments: 12

Satanic-Concubine [2006-12-28 09:32:13 +0000 UTC]

That's beautiful Soph. I love the picture too. I think it links in well with the words, the way the heart is upside down.

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celestiality In reply to Satanic-Concubine [2007-01-01 00:41:08 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much again

and yeah, the picture was the inspiration for this one.

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athousandmiles [2006-10-26 11:41:57 +0000 UTC]

I love poetry !
when i'm reading poem i feel wonderfull....ehh...

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celestiality In reply to athousandmiles [2006-10-28 01:37:28 +0000 UTC]

i'm glad - i hope you like mine

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athousandmiles In reply to celestiality [2006-10-28 09:14:57 +0000 UTC]

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TheInsaneWriter [2006-10-26 03:49:20 +0000 UTC]

Wow.
Going through a tough time?

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celestiality In reply to TheInsaneWriter [2006-10-28 01:36:06 +0000 UTC]

yeah... sorta. and thanks

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loveandpeacetotoro [2006-10-26 01:04:45 +0000 UTC]

Cool MAN!

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celestiality In reply to loveandpeacetotoro [2006-10-28 01:32:42 +0000 UTC]

thankies

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evil-empress [2006-10-25 23:32:34 +0000 UTC]

I like this Sophie!!!

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celestiality In reply to evil-empress [2006-10-28 01:26:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^
... and why?

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evil-empress In reply to celestiality [2006-10-29 04:56:10 +0000 UTC]

because i do!

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