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Published: 2006-10-25 12:37:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 176; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Fall.To descend, and gather speed. They watch, as gravity
reclaims me.
My life is trapped in a dance of chaos;
please give me back
my control.
Under the stares of flattened eyes – searing my soul
I fall.
To await the end, and yearn for help. They watch, as shadow
reclaims me.
My thoughts are stolen, plucked from my mind;
as their voices lessen
my control.
Under the waves of desperate pleas – drowning my soul
I fall.
To give up, and fall within. They watch as my heart
reclaims me.
My hopes are dying, suffocated by night;
and I relinquish
my control.
Under the pain of untrusting – scarring my soul
I fall.
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Comments: 12
Satanic-Concubine [2006-12-28 09:32:13 +0000 UTC]
That's beautiful Soph. I love the picture too. I think it links in well with the words, the way the heart is upside down.
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celestiality In reply to Satanic-Concubine [2007-01-01 00:41:08 +0000 UTC]
thanks very much again
and yeah, the picture was the inspiration for this one.
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athousandmiles [2006-10-26 11:41:57 +0000 UTC]
I love poetry !
when i'm reading poem i feel wonderfull....ehh...
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celestiality In reply to athousandmiles [2006-10-28 01:37:28 +0000 UTC]
i'm glad - i hope you like mine
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celestiality In reply to TheInsaneWriter [2006-10-28 01:36:06 +0000 UTC]
yeah... sorta. and thanks
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celestiality In reply to evil-empress [2006-10-28 01:26:53 +0000 UTC]
thanks ^^
... and why?
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