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Scourge.Scour the skies, for a signal
of security;
for an indication of company
in this endless expanse.
Scour the shadows, for a spark
of sympathy;
for a direction to travel along
in this endless plight.
Scour the sentiments, for just one suggestion
of a soul;
for a reason of why we survive
in this endless death.
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I must say I've felt like that sitting through many a lecture
Jokes aside, very deep. Feelings of loneliness and isolation sort of came out while reading it. Another excellent piece.
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some lectures are good times for inspiration
but thank you very much for the fav 
and i really need to get motivated and write and/or finish up some pieces *sigh* you'd think with all this free time something would happen... but no...
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I can see quite a bit of evolving in your work, in a way - and personally, I have to say that it came as a half-shocked 'Was she this good, again..?' and a smile that crept over my face. *chuckles*
You touch deep issues here, deep sentiments and sombre truths. I can definitely relate to the message here. As for the structure, it's like whiplashes of the mind, piercing and keen, and yet not too abrupt to put into a rhythm.
Very good work!
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thank you very much
i'm glad you see some improvement 
its strange how my mind wonders to these kind of ideas when im supposed to be listening to a lecture
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Wow, that's very interesting. Love the indenting.
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thanks, glad you think so!
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