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Published: 2007-09-12 01:43:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 686; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 8
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Description Mama where did you go
I can't see you through the smoke
I heard a big crash
Now everything looks like trash
My eyes hurt and my head is spinning
Please mama, this smog just isn't thinning

What is that orange light
Who is screaming mama
Is that you?
Please come find me
I can't breath

Mama I've fallen now
I can't see a thing
What is this place
What has this world become

It's getting darker now
The stench is so foul
Debris is everywhere
Please tell me mama that there's nothing to fear

I close my eyes
Getting ready to cry
But no tears come

Is this the end?
Mama why must this be
I thought this was the land of the free
Now there is nothing but rubble
Our nation is about to crumble

Mama this is good bye
I have given up I can't even cry
Say to daddy that I love him that I really really do
Tell my sister
When she's born
To never ever mourn

For I have gone with others
With mothers
To a happier place in the clouds
With grace's sweet embrace.
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Comments: 25

xiao668 [2008-10-04 04:29:20 +0000 UTC]

All this crap about bush and everything the government is trying to hide I sometimes forget that death and survival is the real issue.

Thank you for reminding me of what sacrifices people are going through....

You made me cry....Is that good?

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Raalhaan [2008-01-11 22:17:36 +0000 UTC]

Bravo... bravo. I wholeheartedly agree. Thank you for sturring the emotions and reminding us all of that we need not forget. *bows* You are truly good.

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Chaoyll [2007-09-24 15:25:32 +0000 UTC]

I don't often read poetry, but this caught my attention so well.
It's so full of emotion and it brought tears to my eyes.
;A; Well done.
I can't think of a better way to remember. <3

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scrii [2007-09-20 12:59:02 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely beautiful tribute... wonderful writing: captures the emotion perfectly... and it sent a shiver down my spine.

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CelestialWolfen In reply to scrii [2007-09-20 21:08:03 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you <3

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yoru-rose [2007-09-13 18:25:45 +0000 UTC]

i was in ny when that happened

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Silverblood48 [2007-09-13 01:54:52 +0000 UTC]

so sad that that happened......;;;;

A very nice way to remember the 9-11 disaster

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flash-wolf [2007-09-12 22:33:46 +0000 UTC]

wow.... it gave me goose bumps and i felt like crying my self

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crystal-blades [2007-09-12 15:05:29 +0000 UTC]

...

This is so beautiful... You actually made me cry... That's the biggest compliment ever, This is the first time I ever cried because of a poem...

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CelestialWolfen In reply to crystal-blades [2007-09-12 23:08:01 +0000 UTC]

Aw...thank you <3333

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crystal-blades In reply to CelestialWolfen [2007-09-13 13:29:51 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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SpecterRenegades [2007-09-12 15:01:30 +0000 UTC]

That is so sad T-T...
I remember when I came home from middle school and saw it on the news, I never understood what was happening until later that day.
I was just 11 years old I think.

Yes please everyone should pray for those people who lost their lives.

Why should we remember them on only this day? We should remember them every single day...

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cowzorz [2007-09-12 13:22:06 +0000 UTC]

That's so sad, Rain..
It made me cry too.
I'm lucky not to have lost anyone in the 9/11 attack... But I remember when I was a kid, watching the news and being scared to death.

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devilprizz [2007-09-12 09:04:31 +0000 UTC]

awesome words dear
I.. had no idea when it happend... I was on camp.. enjoying my time, while other people... died in one of the terriblest way

I'm sorry hun
but that poem is just... that just say enough

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devilcries [2007-09-12 02:24:48 +0000 UTC]

I... I have no words... It's left me speachless...
I just... This seriously made me cry... That's the last day I saw my Great grandma too. Sad and horrible way to remember her.

I wish to pray for them but simply... I don't know how to pray...

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CelestialWolfen In reply to devilcries [2007-09-12 02:41:21 +0000 UTC]

*frowns and hugs..* I'm sorry for your loss...

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sunshine-eater [2007-09-12 02:18:22 +0000 UTC]



Uncle was in there. I just don't understand why anyone would do such a terrible thing... -hugs- <3
...
-cries softly-

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CelestialWolfen In reply to sunshine-eater [2007-09-12 02:41:52 +0000 UTC]

I'm so terribly sorry for your loss, your uncle did not die in vain <3

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sunshine-eater In reply to CelestialWolfen [2007-09-12 02:53:43 +0000 UTC]

Tis okey. Thank you. ~<3
I'll miss his so. ._.

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Loathingly [2007-09-12 02:13:30 +0000 UTC]

;;

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PuppetMuse [2007-09-12 01:45:13 +0000 UTC]

... why must you make me cry?

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CelestialWolfen In reply to PuppetMuse [2007-09-12 01:47:02 +0000 UTC]

Sorry...

I spent almost the whole day crying, we can cry together.

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PuppetMuse In reply to CelestialWolfen [2007-09-12 01:48:50 +0000 UTC]

Okay. Come here, and I'll hold you.

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CelestialWolfen In reply to PuppetMuse [2007-09-12 01:56:07 +0000 UTC]

*curls into arms*

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PuppetMuse In reply to CelestialWolfen [2007-09-12 01:59:51 +0000 UTC]

*strokes lovingly* <3

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