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Have you ever rode on a bike, in a plane?Have you ever been on a southbound train?
Are you the sort who just stays inside?
Are you the sort who lives life for the ride?
Do you have sisters or brothers, a father, a mother?
Do you have friends, a teacher, a lover?
What kinds of things do you keep on your shelf?
What kinds of things do you do with yourself?
Is there anything there that might be connected?
Is there anything there that might be reflected?
I desperately need to pretend, you see.
In my small world there's no one but me.
There's a window and door and little black box
All shut tight but without any locks.
So I'd like to meet you, but don't come inside
Perhaps we'll just go for a walk or a ride
On that southbound train, but please just stay out.
I don't think I want you lurking about.
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Comments: 9
ScarlettaRose1 [2012-05-08 08:48:55 +0000 UTC]
that's really cool, i wish I could write like that !
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chabbit In reply to ScarlettaRose1 [2012-05-08 22:28:28 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Actually, I looked through your gallery, and a lot of your poems are quite good. I liked the one about synesthesia and "Ascent".
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ScarlettaRose1 In reply to chabbit [2012-05-09 07:08:21 +0000 UTC]
i hated ascent, but i was bored, so...
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chabbit In reply to ScarlettaRose1 [2012-05-09 18:31:46 +0000 UTC]
I thought it was interesting, actually. I love playing with words.
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SirPrinceCharming [2011-10-29 07:31:50 +0000 UTC]
I know as much as nothing about poetry but this is pretty cool c':
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chabbit In reply to SirPrinceCharming [2011-10-29 18:37:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
I don't really write a lot of poetry.
A lot of times I write poetry because it's three in the morning and I have homework to do and I'm feeling very teenage-angst-ish.
Like this! XD
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