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chasingcomets — The Limitations of Divinity
Published: 2002-12-09 17:29:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 84; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 15
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Description The Limitations of Divinity


Do your white flakes purify?
Can you,
in your Divinity,
wash away yesterday's pain?
The betrayal of brothers?
You have cleansed away the rot of autumn
and enveloped us in a warm white blanket.
But do your powers extend
to the scorched hearts of men?
Yesterday, tears escaped my eyes all day,
and today you weep frozen tears.
Are they for us?
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Comments: 3

thewanderingspaz [2002-12-09 19:45:49 +0000 UTC]

LoL nicely done. Keep up the good work, I think I may give up soon lol.

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booga [2002-12-09 19:39:47 +0000 UTC]

yippy lol i like you rock lol

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thetangyzip [2002-12-09 18:44:24 +0000 UTC]

Cool poem. I'm just browsing the poetry right now, I'm glad I came across this one. Interesting ideas, they made me think. I like the second to last line "weep frozen tears", nicely put. Overall nicely done.

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